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    The Wicked Man

    Once Upon a Midnight sky  A rendezvous between you and I    A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know    I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...

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    • A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)

    • a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • There was a wicked man
      who had a wicked cock…

      But I’m a wicked girl
      who wants to rock your world

    • Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶

      With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.

      Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.

      “Once Upon a Midnight sky
      A rendezvous between you and I”

      Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
      you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal

        • You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨

          We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
          You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.

          If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍

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    Do You Think?

    Do you think I can make you wetIf I swirl my fingersinside harder fasterI bet.Do you think I can make you screammy name If my tongue swirls insideand drinksyour cream.Do you think I can make them redeven more with a flick of a tongue or a bite for blood to shed.Do you think I...

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    Nothing Personal 3

      Can she be much colder than his?!?! I've given this woman more than she deserves. She's nothing without me. She can at least show me some respect when I fuck her. Maybe act like she was enjoying herself. I...

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    Inkless

    It seems so often, within the night,I am set adrift, unable to write,for a want of any reliable ink,as I converge upon the brink. While thoughts and feelings swirl,my life passing by in a whirl,so yesterday becomes my tomorrow,stuck on...

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    Poetry: Connection to Awe

    Drawn to places of stars, drawing me – Further afar.Pathways dotted with deer Knowing I Have no fear in the gnosis of My going. Breeze whispering dawn. Venus – Pulsating in The horizon – Over movements of trees. Song Swaying like the seas of the seasonsHaving arrays of reasons in their ways. Where I talk the walk of The...

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