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Read MoreFueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Great!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is really good. Damian <3
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Superb.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Neville]()
Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Neville]()
My pleasure entirely .. 👍
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Fantastic!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you beautiful ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Superb.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Thomas ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.
Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
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thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️
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The want and the holding back are tormenting. Nicely done