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Read MoreThere he was… Laying on the cool grass looking up at the sky Longing to be in her sweet arms once again Wishing he could hold her close just one more time Dreaming of a moment that would never end He rests on the...
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Thanks Damian. I’ve always liked writing pieces that have plot twists or bigger reveals at the end. I often think of those who are passing and what their last thoughts may be.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Wow this a touching piece. The memory of him building the house for her as he is passing away is sweet and sad
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Thank you Fia. I was trying to have this piece read more as a Civil War piece but felt that it’s obscurity in time could be left open to interpretation and connection to the reader.
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Stay true to yourself, my friend.
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Thank you, Atticus
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tell her… she doesn’t believe me
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I believe you;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Fia, never a need to apologize for being honest. You have a huge heart my friend and I know how much you want all of us to thrive and be comfortable in our home while continuing to build ourselves a prosperous community. Thanks for all that you do! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Thank you for all you are doing. The other sites are boring and soulless. This site has seen considerable growth, and I appreciate our diverse group of poets and writers having a place to congregate.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Benjamin, I appreciate you saying that.
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The site is BEAUTIFUL and fun, Fia. Also, you were the first one to reach out to me. I appreciate the great effort you do, because talking to the site members and working on this site is a HUGE job. Thank you for that. It surprises me that someone has been nasty to you, but just so you know – and I believe I speak for many – there are more of us who support you 🙂
Al
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Thank you for that Al. I appreciate it.😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, incredible flow throughout especially that first stanza. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Underrated word, ‘connive’. Very expressive. Like a baleful but seductive energy straight from the Abyss….
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This is not a poem. This is a black magic charming spell. 😀
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Cleverly penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Reflection often offers more now as an older man than I was younger and naive.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend, grabbed me by the heartstrings a bit. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian