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    Clones

    feeling bored and all alone    looking for my flesh covered bones    keep calling all of my clones     all I keep getting is a dead dial tone   It’s been a while since I’ve seen me...

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    • Love this! Also, great music taste!

      • Hi Drieks!
        I LOVE your taste in music so to know we are in tune with our tunes made my day!
        This was my version of the song. lol

        I’m a huge fan of Queens of the Stone Age.
        I’m also a huge fan of Brody Dalle:)

        Thanks for stopping by my rose patch friend:)

        • I’m not familiar with Brody Dalle. Looks like I have some homework to do! Thank you for pointing me towards artists that are new to me. I love discussing music. Have a wonderful day ❤️

          • She was married to the lead singer of Queens of the Stone Age. Divorced now but I love her music! This is one of my faves.

            • I’m so glad you mentioned her. I’ve been putting her songs on my playlist one after the other. Thank you!

    • Dark and dragged kicking, we love it Lady

      • Hey Meme!
        Thank you, thank you!
        I was in a mood when I wrote this lol
        I love females who can kick some ass. Hahaha

        Later gator!

    • An army of you?! The world isn’t ready! LOL
      This is rockin! I like the edginess of it, too. It shows a side of you that doesn’t get aired much. The grit and the power-punch lines. I love it! That’s my girl! (Woman!)
      Keep that fire baby, you’re going to need it soon! What!

      • Hahaha, an army of me would be fabulous if I do say so myself.
        We would storm all the Pandora jewelry stores! Hehehe

        I’ve been told I look like other people! Stopped in the mall and all kinds of stuff. True story!

        Thanks for all the encouragement and support babe.
        Means the mundo!

        • I already explained to you why people think that you’re a TV personality etc. Because you have so much in common with what it takes. The charisma and personality. The looks, obviously.
          Yadi yadi yadi. Don’t be getting all smug and self-righteous on me! Lol

    • Aww thank you but you are biased! lol
      Self-righteous never, smug on rare occasions!
      Hey I’m human not perfect lol

    • This is a rip up the road poem. A take no prisoners poem! A plasma TV for the ship’s deck matte poem! Walk the plank on roller skates poem. Eat a box of pop tarts in one sitting poem. A half-gallon of chocolate milk in one chug poem. lol Good one.

      • Hahah. I love the energy of your comment! Woop Woop!
        Thank you for catching my vibe buddy.
        If I remember correctly you were the one who said I have a doppelgänger on DUP!

        Roller skating off a plank! In real life I’m a klutz! I’d roll off before I get to the end. 😂

        Thanks for stopping by amigo!

    • Powerfully penned, Adel. Love the vibe and attitude of this write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hey Damien.
        What can I say, I was in a mood when I wrote this. lol
        I’m glad you enjoyed my clone wars! 😝

        Have a great day!

    • Love the music vibes. Great ink.

      • Hey Nick:)

        Thank you! Something about music always gets me motivated to write.
        Thanks for stopping by!

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    Bleeding Blood

    Upon the sharpest    Hook moon of fright  Answering the call     Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this    Rusted metal shed  Surrounded by misted     Red air of dread Remnants of lovers    From who I...

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    • Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
      This has a great A-B flow to it. Nicely done

    • Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol

    • Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
      I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
      Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
      It’s super well done and well timed for the coming season. Perfecto!

    • I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
      And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
      I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
      Next time I see you I’ll bite!

    • Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damien!
        I enjoy fantasy horror.
        I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
        And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.

        Thanks for checking this out amigo!

    • Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂

    • Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈‍⬛🖤🐧😎👍

      • Nev, amigo!
        When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
        Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
        There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.

        I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
        Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)

    • Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.

    • An interesting write, suitable for the season.

      • Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!

        I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
        Thanks for stopping by amigo!

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    Golden Addiction

    The sun was my omen I'm lost to my loved ones I feel it in my bones it's a fight at the height of each day, need to keep my eyes awake It's hot and I'm sticky drinking gold flake lemonade the sun was my omen and...

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    • Creatively done Adelly. I like the metaphors within this and the addiction related idea. Nice!!!!

    • Hey there Tim!
      Of course I find a typo! Hahaha
      It’s always after I post!

      Thanks for checking this out buddy.
      Just wrote today:)

    • Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Crisp… resounding… well done my dear

      • Thank you! It’s a phrase I’m thinking about for my next book!
        It was originally going to be Poetry Stained Teeth – The Golden Addition but me and my typos!
        I put addiction instead and I thought – Hmmm, I dig it! Hahaha

    • This poem brilliantly captures the allure and danger of obsession. The golden imagery makes the craving feel vivid, intense, and almost irresistible, while the tension between desire and self-destruction gives it a haunting edge.

      • Hi Roma. Yes, that’s exactly where I was going.
        How we can be so caught up in what we think is good for you and over do it.
        Tricking ourselves into destruction.

        Thanks for the comment!

    • Excellent ink my friend and subsequently awarded the dubble thumbs up and a gold star .. Neville 😎👍👍⭐

    • It’s cool how you left the golden addiction nameless to the end but alluded to it throughout. I’m a moon girl, myself. The sun hates me. 😂 This was beautifully executed!

      • The sun hates everyone that’s why we get sunburned. Hahaha
        A little is okay but too much is painful. It can feel like an oven.
        But I see people baking out there, loving it.

        I love the moon too:)
        It’s forgiving

        Thanks for checking this out!

    • Hahaha. I love that!
      I’m glad you enjoyed the romp amigo!
      Stay cool Adagio!

    • Hey there. I’m the guy in the back, late, but clapping along with everyone else. LOL
      Awesome write, Del. It’s a tinge on the darker hue of mood, but it isn’t depressing. It’s actually like a scowl towards the sun, knowing you have to face it. That’s an underlying strength. Which you have!
      Great stuff young lady!

      • Better late than never!
        You get special passes young man. Hehehe
        I was in a mood so I went with it and this write was given birth. lol
        Thanks again love buddy:)

    • love buddy? OMG it sounds like a reality show ! You ready? I told you that you have natural star qualities. Time to show up!

      • I’m grabbing my star studded shoes and clicking three times while chanting I want to go to Mark’s:)
        And you are my love buddy!

    • Cool. I’m your tin man babydoll.
      My gal pal! My funk punk!
      My grammarly mammories!

    • Tremendous work. I relate.

      • Hi Thomas.

        Thank you. Wanted to post something a little edgy and different.
        Sometimes I want to sound like a poet and sometimes I want to sound like a mess. lol

        Thanks again!

    • Love love this one! there is something special and alluring about it, (the sun was my omen) is a line that sticks in the head! All this poem reminds me when there is so much emotions and feelings, overwhelming and overflowing… and You don’t know what to do with them, You look at the sun and all You feel is You wanting to be it, wanting to expand with no end! Fabulous Bright Poem ✨🌞✨

      • Oohh. I dig this comment! Yes expand with no end. When our time comes our life force transforms into something else entirely. Into energy and off we go! Being on that level of transcendence, I can only imagine.
        Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)
        It was enlightening!

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