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She held a long glass
with something
on ice in her hands
and of course,
she looked just about
perfect like that ..
All kind of poised but
unposed if you
know what I mean ..
And when set
against a backdrop
of those bright
painted beach huts
and parasols
she knew she was or
near as damnit ..
Yes she could lay like
that in the sun
all day long and not
even blister
but would still look
as cool as any cucumber ..











Powerfully penned, Neville. Another excellent write with layers my friend. No blisters and cool as a cucumber, must be nice.. I burn on a cloudy day. lol. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
You are way too kind Damian .. Thanks a million .. Neville
Good Day my friend🌸 I thought today that I must visit your page since it has been a while, but it seems You were inactive for a month.
You always have the talent to paint women in the alluring way, and You always make me feel like You are a painter who doesn’t miss any tiny detail. Lovely poem💕
Hello my dear friend .. Bless You that is a fine compliment I shall try for always to live up to .. I have not posted here because there has been very little activity and the site seems to run slow .. I shall post something very soon tho’ .. honest 😎🥀🥀🌻⭐⭐💛👍
I totally agree, I don’t get any notifications so I don’t know if I got any review or if someone replied to me. I will check your newest 🧡
You are my only five star, sunflower, gold heart & red rose friend .. 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻💛🥀
I totally agree, I don’t get any notifications so I don’t know if I got any review or if someone replied to me. I will check your newest 🧡