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I penned this one in March of 2024. I found it in the dusty corner of the vault. It was posted on DUP, but never on Stars, until now. This one is pretty straightforward me thinks. lol. Appreciate you. - Damian DeadLove

why am i here I ask?

denied of a reply

making money the only task

taxed until the day i die

 

what is the meaning?

in the simplest terms

i keep on dreaming

without significant returns

 

i’m not surprised to find

that the world was rigged

open doors in my mind

it was my heart i gigged

 

numbed in the pale silence

current demons are encrypted

we kindly invite violence

while coming off as fake or scripted

 

another random Tuesday

visiting the familiar voices 

reminded of the role i play

the weight in making choices

 

it’s hard to keep a secret

with so many digital eyes

trying to swim without being bit

only to be drown in lies

 

wisdom comes with mileage

experience is around the block

by the time you have both

your broken down and old

 

such is life they say

by the time you have a plan

one foot’s in the grave

and the other is asleep

 

 

 

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      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is kinda of bittersweet, but as you said it’s never too late to start. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    1. I remember this one!

      “another random Tuesday
      visiting the familiar voices
      reminded of the role i play
      the weight in making choices”

      That right there reminds me of voting, for some reason. Death and taxes are the only guarantee, I guess. But while we’re on the topside of the dirt, the weight of responsibility presses. Especially these days. Good to see this one again, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorites verses as well, I can see how it does sound like voting. They are the only guarantee it seems, we’re even charged a fee to die. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    2. This is deep. Glad you found it and posted. And while you’re right the world seems rigged, I don’t so much think it’s the world itself, but the humans pulling the strings.

      Nicely written Damian

    3. Such is the plight of us. Your words are a testament to that. At least you make a killer piece out of the dilemma.
      Excellent crafting Damian. Tight meter and rhymes are a plus too.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do my best to make chicken salad out of… well you know. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    4. Feels like a man staring down the rigged table and still sliding his last chip across just to see what happens.
      You’ve got the grit to ask the ugly questions most folks bury under Tuesday morning coffee.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Spot on commentary, I’m always asking the ugly questions, maybe it’s because I can’t do caffeine. lol. It makes my anxiety so manic it’s intolerable. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    5. when molehills become mountains they just have to be climbed or written about .. You just done good sir .. very good indeed .. you wrote about the whole thing .. Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I am one for details that’s for sure. It’s par for the course, just a step in the journey. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    6. This took me back into the lines of Shakespeare about the stages of life but told in your original way with the rhythm and blues melody that really cast the spell as I read with the dark magic you infuse into your poetry so masterfully, my friend.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Now that’s stellar company to even come close to being in the vicinity of in a sentence with the mention of William Shakespeare. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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