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On The Brink (with Keith – Visions_of_Insanity)

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This collaboration was penned in March of 2025. It was an honor to write with Keith. I thought we gelled well. I also miss him roaming these halls, but we all have a life outside this creative world. Enjoy folks! - Damian DeadLove.
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It’s arriving today 

Our own extinction 

Created with hate 

For evil we annihilate

 

Been digging graves

Under a blood red moon

Until the enemy caves

Falling like a lead balloon

 

Filling our lungs 

With winds of death 

Crushing our bones 

And burning our flesh

 

Air raid siren screams

Feeling panic build inside

Acid infested streams

Death rolls in with the tide

 

Our world is under siege 

Because of “their” reign 

For those who survive 

Nothing but torment, famine and pain

 

In silence they corrupt 

As time slows to a crawl

Guttural growls disrupt 

Painted sky about to fall

 

This fucking mess within our world 

Death & carnage in every town 

Human hate was used to destroy 

Imminent doom is all around

 

Force fed all this negativity 

Wealthy elites funding genocide

Children crying in captivity

Wear the microchip or be denied

 

 

 

 

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    1. Absolutely love how this starts as a declaration, a protest poem at its finest. I might be wrong, but this piece has got a punk/metal feel to it. “painted sky about to fall” is probably my favourite image. And there are a lot of vivid contenders. Great work!!! thank you for sharing.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I dig that line as well. Between Keith and I there are some great lines in this one. I can see the punk/metal vibe. I guess we could split the difference and say it has a Motörhead vibe.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the Armageddon nod for sure. Keith and I just cut loose on this one. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    2. This is such a solid piece. The two of you wove together a genuinely great message that feels cohesive and meaningful. I agree with Kay-1, this does have a punk/metal feel to it. It has a certain energy that doesn’t accept a cage, that’s for sure!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a pretty cohesive message I agree. Nothing is caged when it comes to Keith, he got the ball rolling on this one, I just followed his lead. I told Kay to just split the difference between punk and metal, and let’s say it has a Motörhead vibe. Appreciate you, sis.

        Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the collaboration my friend. I know Keith and I are both fans of you as well. The love is mutual brother. Hope you’re doing well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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