Hear me out.
This whole roses, chocolates, neat little heart-shaped version of Valentine’s Day. Cute. Safe. Manageable. Love trimmed down, choking in powdered pink.
Give me dark velvet red, shiny bracelets, black binds and dripping candles.
A dim room where lust and desire spill past reason, take up too much space, change the air I breathe. A dark possession that rearranges everything, rewires my brain, the very fabric of my being.
I am talking about the kind of devotion that refuses moderation. The kind that protects without hesitation, that chooses someone and reshapes the world around that choice. Fierce. Excessive. Unhinged, maybe. But real.
While everyone else exchanges paper hearts and sweet little promises, join me in celebrating the overwhelming, consuming love that does not ask permission to exist.
Happy Valentine.
Dark Devotion
They call it madness,
as if a fire this bright could be contained
by a word so small as love.
Let the world keep its paper hearts and sugared lies.
I have no interest in a love that breathes quietly;
I want the kind that chokes the air,
that demands the oxygen from every room
until there is only you.
If the horizon ever dared to shadow your light,
I would take a match to the sky.
I would peel the stars from their cold perches
just to feel the heat of your smile against the dark.
They say love is a sanctuary,
but for me, it is a siege.
I am the wall, the blade, and the torch.
There is no map I wouldn’t redraw,
no empire I wouldn’t reduce to ash and rubble
if it meant your light never dimmed.
Let it all burn.
The cities, the history, the very ground beneath us.
I would stand in the center of the inferno,
blackened and hollowed out,
holding you above the flames,
the only thing worth saving
from the ruin.
You are the beginning of the world,
and I will gladly be its end.









Passionately penned, Kay. Excellent write with some dark edges and amazing imagery my friend. Way to shake things up a little. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
lol, thank you.
Hi Kay!
Hope this finds you well.
What an entrance into StarsRite!
And I wholly agree with you. this Valentine thing is sooooo sweet, caries are a greater risk than fun.
Keep them coming please! Welcome!
Kind regards, Gus
Hey Duhsjaak,
Thank you for the warm welcome. i’m glad you enjoyed the poem.
Kay…..welcome aboard and what a great piece to start with.
Valentine’s Day is simply a commercial construct based on some very loose history.Got to keep the cash registers ticking over between Xmas and Easter.
Surely a BDSM day would be better than a Valentine Day.Id like to see business monetize that..
🙏
Whips and Chain day, haha. Thanks, Backdeckbenny, for your kind words.
Keep it flowing. I’m enjoying this.
Thank you, Casket. I appreciate the read.