Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, I love the layers and depth throughout this one. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

There’s too much life
to let it end at death.

This is powerful dude, we just read maybe yesterday that scientist now believe life doesn’t end with certain bodily functions. Strange, we ave to get back on your pieces

wow. Thans man.

You have literally rendered me speechless 🤯 Wow, indeed!

Thank you.

This drips with grit and shadow—each line a pulse of pain and dark devotion.
You’ve poured the body’s ache and the soul’s rust into a river of red, unafraid to bleed.

This one bleeds ink and teeth—raw, unashamed of its own hunger and haunt.
You don’t pretty up the blues here; you bite down on them and grin through the bruise.

Thank you, Thomas.

Hi Atticus,
I’m with Thomas W. case. His comment being a poem in itself.

Yours is almost an abstract landscape of lust. Love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus

Your poem shines in raw, haunting and intense beauty,. You’re a master of metaphors, my friend!

Thank you, Elke.

spurting, telling x

Thank you, Jacqui.

Thank you very much for being your collaboration partner, dear Atticus! It wasn’t only a very inspiring dialogue, it was also a lot of fun!

I love collabs my friend, it was you that made it better,