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Read MoreCloud Bursting The sky skeleton opens her rib cage to cradle our skin storm, which now only falls as rain Sailing our ship alone lighthouse blinks within coffin, maybe you can pack a suitcase with sadness walk backwards down star staircases Unbuttoned and undressed naked as winter tombs, moving-on submits...
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Very kind. Thank you
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I like the cadence and the flow ….
BIG LIKE
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Thank you. Really good to see you again. Hope you are well. R
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So good to read you on here H. I’m learning the delicate touch of braille and happy to welcome heart & skin acrobatics x
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate the love on this isn’t one an easy write to write but it was on my mind 💕💕
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Brenda this is quite beautiful.
The world talks about being different and individual but when you are they detest you.
Don’t bother about the world.Its a delusion mostly and is finite.
In the meantime, use your saphosexuality to seduce as many men as you like.
You’ve done it to me more than once with your writing….😜-
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good morning dearest Benny thank you graciously you made me smile today 💕
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We wear our life upon our looks. Some more obvious than others.
Chances are, we fall in love with someone after we have seen them physically and got beyond that, and into their psyche.
Confidence is the most attractive trait. Not arrogance or cockiness, but a quiet confidence that others will notice, and respect.
That is not looks. It’s a look within the eyes.
You’ll always be okay, if you believe in it.-
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hello dearest Stxian I was just recently in a situation to be surrounded by the upperclass again and I am reminded as I was when I was a child I didn’t fit with their perfect looks and pampered existence anyone could look good if there every whim was met and they didn’t have worry lines say about where there rent is coming from sometimes life throws so muvh at you your toenails not being perfectly manicured goes to the wayside thank you for such a lovely comment 💕
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Hoi hoi
The last two sentences are the cherry on the cake.
Could it be that there’s a portion of people who take/love you for what you are?
Don’t know if I’m right, but I love to think I am.
Yes, definitely.
Love your write…
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hello dearest Gus good morning there are those people who love me knowing me I was just around a bunch of assholes who care if you have money and it shows…thank you for the love here 💕
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I will never understand the obsession with “conventional” beauty. The models in magazines are airbrushed & one dimensional. You have depth, intelligence & spirit, Brenda. Those qualities glow, believe me 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow this was more of a critical look at where I am socially I guess it never it occurs to people it isn’t from stupidity it is because of my bad mental health so much of who I am doesn’t line up with conventional and upperclass standards thank you my dear friend for the love here 💕💕
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any fools with eyes can see the surface. but it’s the ones who actually look and can see its the weight you carried before that makes you unforgettable. excellent write.
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hello dearest poet I get weary for being judged for how I appear not my intelligence I have worry lines on my face worrying how I’m going to make it… I am schizo and it relegates me to poverty it was bad life choices it was my mental health that has made life so difficult for me thank you for the love here 💕
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Read Moreanxious lust pulsing through my fleshresist the feelings that ensueyour masculine indulges fantasies of us for me to considermy stoic pride, you are beautiful to mecome to me in daylight and hide yourself in mecome to me at midnight...
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Beautiful work. Powerful.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously for feeling me on this 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very passionate write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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helle dearest Damian forgive my very late response it’s just been sad here thank you for such a wonderful comment 💕
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There is a great rush present in your style.
The intensity is held throughout.
I enjoyed the thoughts flowing through this.
Regards
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hello dearest James I’m sorry it took me so long to get back to you just some hard days thank you most graciously for the lovely comment 💕
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No worries. Keep your fire burning
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Enjoying freewill & preferring instruction, that is humility & love there. Whether it’s Him or him. This is strong, Brenda 🧡
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreI know how it must feelWhen nothing goes rightUnable to close the dealFinish line just out of sightOdds are against survival Never been a betting manBeen living with this denialForgetting everything I can Red flags are all aroundSelling flesh by the...
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh this definitely needs to go on the song consideration lost! Everything about feels powerfully lyrical. The way your mind moves is fascinating. I can’t wait to hear the album, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the possible lyrics my friend. The more I read it, the more lyric potential I see as well. Thank you, my mind moves constantly for sure. I start Monday. I’m excited and nervous, which is the way it should feel. I got that going for me at least. I’ll keep you updated. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice to read you again, my friend. Your writing is almost always musical in my mind…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, K. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This was fire, friend. I always tell myself that doubt is the devil. Whenever I feel like I’m in over my head or failing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Couldn’t agree with you more, that’s what is usually going down. Appreciate you.
Damian
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