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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreSimplicity can produce brilliance Sometimes less is more Reconnecting through resilience Sure seemed easier before Drop the beat ride the bass line Rhythm is raging hard Ladies sipping on foreign wine Melody is her calling card Guitars solo over...
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Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight ink Have a great day!!
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well said, beautifully penned.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreAnother opportunist for hire The cat with nine lives Constantly feeding on desire Somehow this rat thrives Cowards watch the slaughter Picks the bones find a gem Through shit infested water Without getting any on them Right place...
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When a knife kisses, bone is a powerful image. Nice poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked the write my friend. It is a powerful image for sure. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, this is a dark pearl in the sea of poetry. You give your imagery power and grit that unfolds like a dark dream as I read. Truly grand read tonight.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well written my friend. Magnificent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreDo you remember the days When you heard the radio play We are the world And “One” on Bono’s tour We just wanna have fun Was chased by I wanna dance with somebody Are those days done Hello anybody! A Smooth Criminal was played all-day Now we have...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Music and politics collide often. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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They have gone away, Thank you Atticus.
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okay, will get on this.
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Tremendous work. I remember those days well. You bot me thinking about Terrance Trent Darby…Wishing Well. Great song.
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Yes, I know that song. Thank you, Thomas
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.