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Read MoreI jut out from the long black seama shiny thing, unlike any other in the shaft.Just a speck of brightness,a stark contrastin the endless darkness.I know I'm different.Always have been.The black seam dominates everything down herewith its drab, dour,...
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. A diamond in the rough so to speak kinda vibe. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Marvelous…
Wonderful wordplay…
Perfect ending…
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Drieks, this is great.
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Thank you so much Fia 🙏🏻
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics and a stellar arrangement my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! I appreciate it 🙏🏻
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<#3
Awesome on so many levels…
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Thank you Cipher! I’m glad you like it!
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Agreed with Cipher so many great stanzas, you even came with the word play, to cool Lady.
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Thank you! I appreciate it very much 🙏🏻
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Outstanding, girl! I can see Poe, sitting in a hardbacked chair pulled around backward so he can lean his arms on the top., and he’s tapping his toes, girl, and smiling big, while whispering, “Damn, I wish I were that good!”
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Thank you so much FD! To be even compared to Poe is too much of an honor! 🙏
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Hey, I just said he’d LIKE you, and wished he were that good. And I’m sure he would.
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Read More...and then she died during a fierce heatwave Flat lined, tomb side ‘Toss my ashes to the northern lights to drift among birches and be buried by snow’ Arrested for Drink Dreaming Poured myself into vodka puddles hoping for tender poetry rain, but words were mere reflection in dripping water on gravestones Talking to...
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Fantastic!
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Phenomenally penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreHoi hoi!An American friend wrote beautiful poems/lyrics for songs that didn’t happen.I thought it would be a very nice idea to change that.Plus, I could never write such a romantic poem!Listen closely please, this is romantic love!Not between Faith...
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This is so beautiful, I can see why you both were complimented.
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Chère F.,
Thank you so very much for your listen!
It really means a lot!
Faith and I salute you!Warm regards, Gus
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This is really a fruitful and beautiful collaboration! The poem is intense and lovely, the music as always skillfully and artistically composed and arranged. Both of you did a wonderful job!
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Chère S.,
Hope this finds you well.And I love it very very much that you took the time to listen (and read).!
This is what dream pop/shoegaze is all about. Why treat the voice differently than any other instrument?
I’m looking forward to writing lots of music and hopefully another coop with you!
Also on behalf of Faith Maree, grateful for your listen.
Warme Wellen (sagt GTranslate that’s when I wave to you?) und
Herzliche Grüße, Gus
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I’m looking forward to further compositions of you, dear Gus! Of course, i would also appreciate a further collaboration with you.
In German there is a big difference between the substantive and the verb.
The wave = die Welle
To wave at someone = jemandem zuwinken. In German you can simply say
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Great collab. This is beautiful.
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Hi Kay
We’re grateful for you listen and comment.
Much appreciated!
Kind regards, Gus
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Yes, you are a diamond. I like how you put this together to show that you are.