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Read MoreShe pulled his jumper up to her face,breathed him into the now empty space.Flopped in the chair that was clearly his own,not sad, not lonely,not even alone.Through the window his eyes once looked throughshe smiled and pondered the beautiful...
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Read MoreOnline warfare being waged everyday Some tech-pimp living in a wet dream Everything on the menu is pay to play Swinging pendulum picking up steam Broken hearts corrupted by confusion Unable to see through this cold illusion Artificial beast hides without disguise Cyborg sex doll disregards...
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Well this is musing. lol
liked the people like privacy they get intrusion part really good-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.
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Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No worries about the typing errors, it happens to all of us from time to time. It is best to search for the light in all things in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreTomorrow has slipped awayfrom your eyes.I can see itin the distant stare,the apathetic blankness,the way you sit beside meand somehowaren't there.Your love is as deadas the orchidsin the trash.I keep lookingfor somethingbehind your eyes,some little sparkthat saysI'm still here.But...
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congrats Thomas on your book
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Thanks.
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Well designed write about a situation that we all can relate to. The anguish is well described here. We feel it.
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Thanks. Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Another excellent write with incredible storytelling my friend. Congrats, on the book. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Read MoreWhen human minds begin to fray And souls forget their tune The ones who stand apart and judge Believe they're still immune. But we're all so bloody fragile, Our thoughts can lose their form; No soul beneath the turning sky Can shelter from that storm. Each person...
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Hi Peter
How are you?
You expressed so much in few lines.Jessy Jacob
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I’m fine and thanks for asking.
This poem was prompted by a newspaper article about a woman who changed completely after menopause…..we are very fragile.
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It’s the ones who insist they’re fine when clearly they’re not that scare me. We humas are very fragile indeed
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Well you’re right! And sometimes we think we know them, until we realize that we don’t. The mind is each of our own little universe, it’s so vast. Some people get off track along the way.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. No one is immune to time and the effects it has on the mind. Thanks for sharing. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreSomebody is always tryingto give me something.A gift wrapped in bitterness,a box full of lunacy,a package of somebody else'stroubled mindwith my name written on it.Sometimes they hand it to mewith a smile.Sometimes they throw it at me.Sometimes they call...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Another excellent write with outstanding storytelling my friend. Clever wordplay throughout this one. I can relate. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, I appreciate you.
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This right here is a perfect expression of boundaries. Taking on the chaos of others can be exhausting. Hell, dealing with our own chaos is exhausting.
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Thank you so much, Willow.
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This is so beautiful. You captured that moment and made me feel the loss but then the beauty of life. They existed.