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Read MoreIn my attic, in a dust-Leadon trunk,I found an old red jacket.It bore wrinkles and smelled of mothballs.In one pocket, I found an old smile.But in the burdensome years since I last wore it I found it no longer...
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Thank you Peter.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate the comment, thank you.
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hello dearest Tim this is beautiful I enjoyed the metaphors here… I don’t know how to stop hoping no matter what I pray you find belief an understanding of God as I have found him truly to be I looked at church and never found him there… then my scope widened and I found him everywhere ❤️
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Thank you for the comment, Crimsin. 🙂
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Man, I love the part where you found an old smile. The whole piece is great but something about those two words together made me smile. And no, it’s not old! lol
It gave ma a feeling of nostalgia. Wonderful write amigo!
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Thanks so much Adel. :)))
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Powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Tim, this read like a man on a quest to find the joy he once had. You took this metaphor and flew with it my friend. I could visualize the old red jacket in the trunk and you finding it and looking in the pockets for what once was. Truly great work.
John
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Read Moregentle understanding, in your depths I searchto find a way to reconcilethe wild ways of the world and your nature Fatherinside me is conflicting feelingscreative need, you admonish me you prefer my softer sidecruel desire is the way of...
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It is very bewitching. When he tells you to stay calm so his monster does not come out. nice
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hello lovely Fia he told me last night after I posted my poem he said he knows I am capable of this mischief but he prefers my softer side…I asked him further about his varied sides and he says it’s all in what side I provoke will I get from him thank you for reading and commenting ❤️
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Crimsin, both tender and fiery this poem is. He tries to elicit your soft side but his true nature brings out the lioness. Great poem as I have come to expect from you.
John
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brilliant work. Powerful.
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Brenda, you amaze me with, “of others playing on different courts.” Love that line.
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A lovely & fragile piece of poetry Brenda. You always seem to amaze. Great work here.
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Read MoreStress encircled her eyes. When any hope was hopelessand light-years away,she opened her dresser drawer. Beneath lengthypharmacy referralsand exponential credit card billsthe black metal trigger resembledthe color of a raven. At the speed of lightand with enough energyto cross the expanse of...
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No, hope, could not find a way out of everything.
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Sadly no. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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It is sad but you ended it with a bang. I love that you used the word stardust!
Even though she was tortured, you made her sparkle at the end.
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Nice observation Adelly. Thank you for the comment. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Not every write has a happily ever after. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you liked it. Thanks Damian. 🙂
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Tim, this was softly explosive. Like a dream that comes true in a dark and sad way. Exquisitely written my friend.
John
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Read More5.33 amback deckcup of teabirds callingno windfruit bats returning home8 billion human beingsso very few experience these moments it really is just dumb luck no God involved.***************************Quote from Stan Gramt in this mornings paper:As a society, as a species, we are...
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There is no future in the past. Only lessons. Nice one
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Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
The only real problem with AI is, that it makes the truth almost impossible to discern.Seeing used to be believing but not anymore.No doubt, the powerful and the wicked will use AI for any other reason than to create poetry etc.💋💋💋💋
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Read Morecoveted need leads me onward into the darkwith a witches eye I see what is going on in the doldrumall to spark an affliction, desperation a mode of opperationseeking culted desirefire speaks and ignites passionin dreaded dominion find yourself...
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give me a sip?
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smiles at you thank you Jim ❤️
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I like that a little witches brew should do. Made me smile.
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thank you graciously lovely Fia was my pleasure I’m to give you a smile ❤️
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What a fantastic Halloween temptress poem that gripped me as I read. Playful and seductive and so wickedly dark.
John
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thank you graciously dearest John I’m happy you enjoyed ❤️
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Cleverly penned, Brenda. Amazing Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously you made me smile with your comment ❤️
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Happy Helloween Brenda. This kicks ass! Love the atmosphere you create.
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happy Halloween dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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If you could syphon off the witches brew and sell it you’d be a millionaire. It’s a good job, only witches know how to make it.
Great read.
regards
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hello dearest James the powers that be tell me I won’t profit off my talents…then again it’s not what I seek… thank you for reading my spell ❤️
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I enjoyed this immensely.
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