This is an interesting first chapter.

Wait until you read the rest then you can judge

ok im going to hang up my cape and give up story telling … ive found my match

so what kind of stories do you like?.. lets see if you like some of my many gifts

oh I haven’t even started… wait

Filled with the desire to live life fully unburdened by guilt and sorrow. A truly grand ode to a higher power. Very strong emotions made into an eloquent poem.

John

The first two verses were incredble hard to top.
But you maintained your intensity.
I often find verses scream out to me when I read peoms.

“A defective part of some bigger machine.”

hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️

hello dearest poet I deeply appreciate your thoughts thank you graciously ❤️

Superb work. Powerful.