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    Trash on Everest

    There's always that person that is shrouded in maybes Of missed moments, shared glances Maybe even stolen kisses and touches Ambivalence lacing that the purest longing sorrow It's a wretched thing to get close to Everest  And just end up with your heart as...

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    • Powerfully penned, Blue. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Or… the dude could have been a serial killer, and you missed out on a painful death. If Ted Bundy had been wandering around my campus when I was in school, just damn. I’d have jumped on that Volkswagen gearshift in a heartbeat.

      I get you, though. Missed opportunity. It’s tough when you’re a girl. Guys think you’re being too assertive, but they always miss the signals.

    • Like Damian stated, I also found this powerful. Not everyone can make it to the summit for whatever reasons, but your analogy here is strong.
      Nicely penned.

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    Cadence And Measure

    The warmth of my tongue enters Kissing the lips of her parted petals Usual suspects repeat offenders Sweet moans as her rhythm settles   Lost in passion moving to the flow All the worries give way to pleasure Tension fades releasing angelic glow Melting in my cadence...

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    • Great title

      Pleasure journey

      BIG LIKE

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked the title as well, kinda stands out there, you dig? Definite pleasure journey. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.

    • I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!

      Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Ok, maybe I’m not as horrible at writing erotica as I thought I was. But you’re right, it’s not my most confident voice. lol. Anyhow, I’m not shutting them out like I used to, if I have an idea I entertain it now. Thanks for always being so supportive my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I like this style of erotica.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Reggie. So glad you liked the write my friend. I prefer this style as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • damn. excellent write.

    • Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
      “All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
      You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.

      xoxo

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. That’s a huge compliment, “Sexual Healing” and Marvin Gaye that’s stellar company. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Yeah, it was inspired. You wrote an erotica piece, then Willow had one, Then Meg, Then Mary, then Naaj. I’m sure there were others, it was like everybody was writing erotica that day. lol. So I followed suit. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Feverish Friday

    There is nothing like the feeling I get on FridayThe minute I think of the word, it’s like a switch goes offFriday is freedomFriday is sweet abandonFriday makes me feel sultry and decadentWhat is it about the day?Every Friday...

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