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    hope

    inside the stillness I can abidemelancholy exists here a humbling placeyour life slowed down within feeling portraitsof where you've been and where you're goingcarefully I reviewsadness grows wearymy thoughts worrydeep in my hollow spaces there is timegreeting me in...

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    Be Careful

     You want to know what my day is looking likeNo, you don't. You really do not wanna knowIf I had to describe my day in a colorIt would never be a blue dayViolet is too tenderThe only color I...

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    • I’ve had days just as you described but without the anger.
      All that is certain is that your mood, like everything else, is impermanent.
      While your feeling like crap its a good time for introspection.The way out is in.🙏

      • It does take me a while to get out of that headspace. But I do get out of it, and honestly, it is best when I am alone, so I do not come at people at that time. Thank you, Peter

    • Happy Wednesday Fia. I know it’s not a great day for you.

    • hello beautiful Fia I feel you on this I can’t shake my mood either and I’m getting nothing done I have no motivation pain sucks it right out of you great write 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. I think your day will get better my friend, thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you, girl. It was a very difficult day. I straightened it out. I did use that fury to help out, though. lol

    • Use that anger to reflect and learn what not to do, so the situation can be controlled and conquered.

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    sadness

    sending thoughts out upon highhear me God, my Fatherwith sighs I say my prayersa whisper and a calmbeautiful stillness in the chaosI'm neither here nor therethings have slowed down and I pauseto reflect on your smile and the day...

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    • Brenda, I cannot imagine the pain you’re going through. Losing a parent is nothing compared to losing a child. My heart and prayers with you. You can do him justice now for holding onto all the memories and writing about them. I hope that helps a lil’.

      Daniel

      • hello Daniel thank you for the love I don’t want to quit writing but I can’t get past my sadness in it 💕

    • Your beautiful tribute Brenda is heavenly. My thoughts go out to you. xo

      • thank you graciously dearest Keith I don’t want to be sad anymore but it occurs to me I am altered I deeply appreciate your presence and love here 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • hello beautiful Angel thank you what a tender and loving song…it’s very hard I keep remembering the day he was born and his milestones I miss him…I want to quit being sad but I don’t know how…I appreciate you listening 💕

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    Improvise

    A guiding light cutting through the dark Solitude making these years seem long Fuzzy suggestions are capable of spark Sometimes truth gets written into song   Always a little fuel remaining in the tank With production costs continuing to rise People forced to walk the fucking...

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    • Comes off to me as someone fighting depression. Finding away to move forward. Or maybe that’s just me hehe.

      Great ink

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m sure depression is one of the crucial ingredients in the mix. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Life is hard because of those rich fucks in Washington. Great piece. Well said!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They sure as hell don’t help matters. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Fantastic work. Powerful.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Omg, there are so many layers to this one. I read the comments above mine & saw where each came from. This one is a head tilted, brain-teaser. I see isolation, slight inspiration skirting around the edges, darkness peering though & the inevitability of death. I haven’t figured out an improvisation for that one yet. My daughter has decreed I’m not allowed to die though. Not sure that’s gonna workout for her but she says “that’s a you problem, figure it out.” If you know a cheat code on that, I’d be grateful if you’d share, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think you’re pretty much spot on in your analysis, there are multiple elements in there for sure. Usually is in my writes. lol. I don’t know a cheat code, I don’t think there is one. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Duck Pond Debbie

    I met duck pond Debbie before computersbefore answering machinesbefore...well, I better stop.I'm not sure met is the right word.I was five years old (maybe four, maybe six)Life hadn't beaten the crap out of me yet,so I was friendly and...

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    • Intriguing story. Nicely written.

    • I would have felt uneasy with her reaction too. It was a seed that planted a doubt that something was done and did wrong when there was nothing done wrong.
      Nice piece.;))

    • I don’t trust anyone named Debbie with the exception of Debbie Harry and the adult star in Debbie Does Dallas. Triple D mind you …

      The rest of the Debbie’s can suck my ass ….

      BIG WENDY LIKE

    • Big thanks. It’s funny how names impact us. I have a good friend named Debbie, so she has helped blot out the mini bitch Debbie. I attract a lot of Steves, but maybe that’s because about 1 out of 3 guys used to be named Steve.

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