This is quite an ‘arousing’ piece Fia…..at least pour moi.😜

What a piece you have presented here, great write indeed…

Without both the good and the bad, both would be meaningless words. An interesting piece!

Now, bring the bad. 😀

Beautifully penned, Fia. “Kittens Got Claws,” comes to mind, which is a Whitesnake song. lol. This is a phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic.

Powerful stuff Sam.
There is an aching in those words.🙏

Mr. Nash, I am childless at 38 but want children, yet the title of your poem caught my eye actually and I had to read on… deeply emotional piece and I appreciated reading it.

Daniel

Powerfully penned, Sam. This is an incredible write my friend, feel the sting in these words. Appreciate you.

Damian

always

powerfull…

That’s quite a story Damian.
I’m invested now, thanks for sharing…

Kept me reading on, Damian. Excellent write and important message.

Daniel

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the story my friend. It did take a while to get here. Over 30 years off and on, we worked together. I think I had to get sober to notice what was really going on, while I was drinking I let it slide, probably because he was also my drinking buddy. I mean I knew he could be a real prick and he was becoming less of the person I knew in the beginning. We both had demons, I chose to slay mine. Thanks so much for the continued support my friend, I think you’re one of the few really following. Appreciate you.

Damian

Side note, im reading through this & thinking…Pisces. So similar to my Pisces daughter in many ways. Pisces are some of my favorite people. Joey…I’ve met people like him. Singularly focused with no real touch on the human aspect of the people they’re around. As my daughter would “Dude don’t know how to read the room.” It works for him, can’t conceive of anyone else being different. I can’t even imagine the feeling it must give you when people sing your song in the audience. I would be over the moon & grinning like a madwoman. Always enjoy the Damian journeys, my friend. Keep ’em comin’

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very introspective write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brenda, with our condition it’s going to be a lifelong struggle to meet people and connect until becoming trusted friends. Our writings make us who we are and other writers make great friends… deep piece you wrote!

Daniel