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    in passing

    sound check and roll filmevery moment captured in memoryblack and white sorrow caught in stillifeamazing journey through the hurtblue tears streak a child's facemomma's gone and daddy became my heroyou know he tried so hard to protect me from...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words pulled on these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Your words have a way of slicing below the surface, to the core. The last two lines remind me of the lyrics, “ it’s better to burn out than it is to rust”. Keep shining, my friend.

      I sincerely hope to meet you on the other side!

    • thank you graciously dearest Gus for feeling me so deeply it’s appreciated 💕

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    Destruction does not happen it's created

    I was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated.  As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...

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    • fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving

    • Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate

    • This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.

      • I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice

        • No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁

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    goblin

    desiree of a goblin suitordark and muscularheavy on the seta real thug is what I'm sayingtruest in the houseevoking feelings in me I thought were lostmean don't get me wrong the polished fellows are beautifulmy soul needs someone to...

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    • Sometimes whiskeys better than wine 🌼

    • Jim and Tupac might have been absolute tossers….. showmen.
      Never underestimate the quiet minded ones…..I know I’m one of them.
      Good write sweetie 💋

      • hello dearest Benny I don’t underestimate any person if I can help it… this is just what came up today it’s only one side of me there are many thank you for the love 💕

    • I was drawn to the title first. My daughter’s cat is named Goblin. 😂 But this piece is amazing! Don’t try to change them, for sure. Don’t try to own them either. Easier to capture wind

      • hello beautiful Willow that is so cute I’ve never heard of a cat named goblin… thank you and ain’t that the truth…I’ve been grateful to know one wow did I fall hard 💕

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    flicker

    flikering shadows, despaired nightfrisky feeling, stalking the energyyou reach for me but I push awaytightly bound and reaching...I'm dreamingdarkly inviting is the need poolcommingling with lust it is agonytragic feeling it spells my demisenever to fade in the momentmy...

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