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    Chaos in Color

    I've got so many sidesinside and outside using chaos as my guideshowing me the waybecause babyI'm everything all encompassing  mixing it uptearing shit upI'll bring my shadesI'll bring my coolI'll bring my teethYou bring the warbecause babyI'm a fucking...

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    • Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.

    • Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
      I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
      Hey have a great day!

    • Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.

      • Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
        I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
        It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
        And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.

        Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
        Rock on!

    • hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️

      • Hi Crimsin:)

        Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
        explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. Haha

        I’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
        You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
      We are way too goofy. But I love it.
      Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
      April 29th!

      • Hey big sexy!
        Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
        After we got off FaceTime I started this write.

        You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
        And I keep peeking at you too!

        I can’t wait to be
        face to face
        flesh to flesh
        All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
        Love ya babe

    • (I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)

    • Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
      ❤️k

      • Hi TK!

        It’s so awesome to see you on my page!
        How have you been!

        Yes, I was in a mood hahaha

        Thanks for your snaps on my write amiga:)

    • Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hi Damien!

        Nope you are not alone! For me music opens doors in my mind when I’m writing.
        It really does. It brings different tones or vibes to my write. Hope that makes sense:)
        And please know I appreciate you too!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌

      • Hi Willow.

        It was fun. Sometimes when writing it’s also just as important to catch our adrenaline too.
        My pulse was pumping with this write. Hahaha
        Hope that makes sense!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Dear A,

      Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
      Just fabulous. H 🌷

      • Hi H!

        I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
        And I have seen your brain!
        It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
        You should have a little spice daily chica.
        At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
        I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!

        Love ya and miss ya!

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    Savior/Martyr

    Savior(As told by Mary Magdalene)He was seen as more by some, less by others.As a savior, or a rebel.He lived his life through his heart,being the sinew, trying to hold the world together.And I ached for him, being his...

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    • Your writing is always very deep and this is no exception. Your details of the connection between them is profound indeed and based in love and a memory of him that will never be lost or corrupted. Any comment I can give on this is not enough. There’s so much said here. Great writing, Styx.

      • Thank you Tim. It was a lot of work, including jotting down little notes while working at my job thursday and friday. I do maintenance at an older apartment complex, very busy most of the time. But, the creative ideas wait for no work. LOL.
        I know that this write, because of the title, the header picture, etc, will keep many people away. But I hope those who do read it get something positive from it. There are several gospels not in the bible, some called the gnostics, that tell much different stories from the traditional ones picked to be in the King James version. The version of Mary M being His wife is in some of them. So, who really knows by now.
        And, I am beating myself up over a part three! Do I, do I not. Grrrr.
        I sincerely appreciate your generous comment, Tim. And what you did say is enough. It is awesome.

    • How to start with this. This is excellent!
      Your interpretation of how she adored and suffered his life and loss is truly amazing. A weaving journey through her thought process. How the world can exhaust even the strongest of spiritual character but away from prying eyes, he remembers the blessings of also being human.

      These are gems baby! Honestly:)
      Needs to be put in your book!

      • You knew how much these two writes were beating me up. Lots of editing and hacking, even a few minutes ago. I had a very specific vision of what I wanted it to say. I think I succeeded, after all the edits of course.
        And, the part three…. I dunno. I’m going to chill on it awhile.
        I am so fortunate to have you in my creative journeys. Because you do the same things and can relate to it all.
        I love you immensely!

    • And I, sir, appreciate your steady support of my efforts here. I try my best to make them matter. So thank you.

    • So, when I finished reading this, I took a deep breath and said, “Jesus!”. And then I laughed to myself, because I was only saying it as an exclamation about your writing and not as a statement of the subject… LOL.

      Anyway, this is just beautiful. Not much more I can say. Thank you for sharing it.
      ❤️k

      • LOL !! I purposely avoided using his name in any form. Because it is about Mary’s feelings in dealing with it all. The very human aspect of someone dealing with such a weight added to a relationship. Like dating someone famous, etc., then losing them. Obviously it is on a grander stage. But being human has its basic emotions for all.
        Its so good to see ya! Rock star!

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    Death Wish Kiss

    Born from the rib of my brother    Didn't ask to be the starter sister  Looking over my shoulder    Lost eyes searching for my mother. Guess it wasn't meant to be        Long past time to...

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    • Adel that kicked out of the garden where there is nowhere to go. That is a good line. Enjoyed this piece

      • Hi Fia:)
        You know when you’re writing and it just flows. This was one of those writes for me.
        Everything fell into place:)
        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Nirvana – Pennyroyal Tea (Live And Loud, Seattle / 1993)

      One of my favorites by them – Nirvana – Radio Friendly Unit Shifter (Live And Loud, Seattle / 1993)

      This poem is friggin deep. One of your best. There’s so much here that stands out. That rebellion that starts from disappointment or betrayal. It’s like you’re saying – I what? I can’t eat that apple? Get out of the way! Crunch!

      I went to a catholic school – first to eigth grade. Imagine my horror when a detective called me one day asking if I was sexually abused there. It turns out many were. I never knew it.

      My faith has gone back and forth. I believe, to…Hmm, looking around, I don’t know.

      There’s a lot going on in this, but I love it. It stands out. Great work, Adelly.

      • Hi Tim!! Hahaha.
        Hell yeah, I said move out of the way and took two bites instead of one. Hehehe
        What can I say, listening to Nirvana got me in a mood. Especially the opening line where he sang -I’m on my time with everyone.
        I don’t know, i felt like why wait, i’ll take a bite of that apple right now. And it grew from there.

        Like I was telling Damien. Follow what feeds your spirit in a positive way. Whatever that may be.
        As simple as it sounds do what makes you happy:)

        Thanks for your snaps on my write amigo!

    • Every single line felt .. and felt deeply .. no effort required to feel where you are coming from .. and with much respect, much respect & write on, because you do it so well Neville 😎🌻👍

      • Hi Nev!
        Thank you for that.
        It was quite the feeling when I sat back after I was done and thought to myself, did I write that?
        I actually went to an open mic night in town and read a couple of my poems. I’m thinking about reading this one next time.
        I’d love to see the reaction. lol

        Thanks for your snaps amigo!

    • Thanks Damien,
      I truly don’t believe there is a wrong religion. As long as it isn’t hurting anyone and feeding your spirit positively.
      For me it’s also geographical and cultural. I’m Hispanic and was raised with the Catholic Church so that is what I practiced as a young adult. As I got older I got curious about other religions. And I can thank the late goddess Tina Turner for that. Yes I watched the movie What’s love got to do with it! Lol.
      She had a strict Baptist upbringing and later in life embraced Buddhism. It’s inspiring:)
      You can always change your mind, even when it comes to something so sacred as religion.

      Thanks for stopping by amigo!

    • It’s interesting to me how the movement of this is similar to a snake, it winds its way down. And those last lines are powerful! I have a complicated relationship with faith. What I’ve resolved as my peace is that I don’t believe in religion but I have a deeply spiritual connection with my faith. Great write!

      • Hi Willow.

        I’ve come to embrace faith.
        It’s so much more stronger than religion in my opinion.
        For me being female is powerful. Choosing knowledge for me is sensible not a crime.
        I was always confused about why that choice had such consequences for a bible that is supposed to be about forgiveness.
        I know it plays a larger role about giving us choices but still. Didn’t sit well with me.
        Girl, don’t get me started! Hahaha

        Thanks for stopping by:)

    • (What Willow said!)

      Hey beautiful. I am in love with your energy, as much as everything else about you. This write is a great example of what you can create from that incredible mind of yours. Hell yes I’m partial! But I’m also smart as hell. I know what is worth my life. You and your talents.
      Bravo mi amor.

      • Hahaha. Hey big sexy! I wrote this way back when I was going through a religion crisis!
        Went to a church, no not a catholic one, someplace different and what they were saying just really put me off, so I left.
        We find our way eventually. Just like I found my way to you:)
        In that regard I am very blessed. You are an incredible human and I am so lucky to spend the rest of my life with you:)
        Plus you bought me converse shoes too! What more can I ask for!

        Love you baby! MWA!😘

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