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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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Read MoreI let myself bleed to breathe. I write out what I need to… Allowing myself to be lacerated by the world's harsh judgments, however, as I bleed, I begin to breathe! Ink bleeds out of my wounds onto the page, and I transcribe what...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Danile this is fantastic always be yourself and I will to 💕
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Brenda, your comment makes me want to ask you to write a piece yourself with the same title! I’m curious and I’m sure I would love what you would create!
Daniel
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it’s funny I wrote a poem called breathe after you and before I saw yours we are on the same wavelength 😊
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Same wavelength of talent… a wavelength only the talented can see! 😉
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Your writing goes under my skin. Intense as if it was really written with heart blood. Perfectly written, Daniel!
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Vielen Dank, Elka! Fühlst du mein Schreiben unter deiner Haut? Das bedeutet, dass ich das erreicht habe, was ich mir hier gesetzt habe! You should see what I see behind my eyes so I can write like this! Hahaha!
Tschüss!
Daniel
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Read MoreNight bore witness to our wild union. It was a hot night along the arched passageway leading into the castle chapel from the expanse of the courtyard. The ancient stone passage was torchlit and our...
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Thank you! Part two coming out by tomorrow morning and things get steamier hahahaha 😆
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Hehehe go ahead and fantasize! Part Two out tonight or tomorrow morning hahaha 😆
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Erotic writing at its best! You’re a great storyteller, eloquent and creative. This piece is damned hot!!!
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In der Tat, erotisches Schreiben von meiner besten Seite! Ich weiß, dass ich ein großartiger Geschichtenerzähler, Dichter, eloquent und kreativ bin, und dieses Stück ist verdammt heiß!!! So heiß, dass es mich aufregt und ich kann nicht aufhören zu schreiben, Elke. Wie immer, vielen Dank!
Daniel
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Read MoreLoves out of order.Imagined fear/terror.Necessary mental response.Collapse of reason and logic.Rise of despair.Sense of hopelessness.What is sleep?Mind always whirring.Suicidal ideation.Nothing but suffering.A smile from a stranger.A speck of light.A lovely thought.Black turns to grey.Grey turns to beige.Some reason returns.The...
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This is an interesting piece starting off one way and flipping it around. That is how life is, right?
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The first one is better in my opinion. Our minds are a battlefield.
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Read MoreForget how to love and learn how to hate. That's my advice for young, audacious writers. Learn to embrace who you really are. Forget the facades that are flattery. Forget gregariousness and learn when to be silent. Forget bullshitting and learn not...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Sound advice my friend, lots of truths in this write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is sound advice, and I’m pretty sure someone would have needed that.
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Thank you, Adira! Writing this made me feel much like an old wise man… lmao. And I hope I can benefit from it as well and write more inspirational pieces!
Daniel
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Vivid and sharp.