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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Thank you,Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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Read MoreGolf is a game of recovery; there'san eagle and sometimes a seagull to keep alonely man company, an albatross but no bluebird.Life is a game of recovery. We all want in.Whether it be the cup or Heaven, myguess is...
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its a whole new ball game isn’t it .. You are a braver man than me tho’ Thomas I daren’t try anything new these days .. I’m either stuck in a rut or stuck in my ways .. Just keep using that shovel tho’ mate and you’ll have a hole in one in no time .. 👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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I do know some of these terms. I get antsy watching golf. You do need concentration and a good swing. I liked this
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Thasnk you.
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Thank you. You’re the best.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you sir.
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I can relate, because I am a super putt-putter! LOL.
This write is full of vivid detail for sure. And concise but fully delved. Perhaps to be printed and posted at every club house across the country…before the hackers take to the greens. LOL -
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Yes. Thank you, my friend.
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Powerful stuff Fia