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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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Read MoreDeath winks at thelilies that smile inthe rain.He takes her.The last dirty trick.Watered drinks andsyphilis doesn't do thepatrons any good.Too much grief forplacebos and madness.Relief must come.Booze and fantasy justbring sickness, andlicking frogs isout of the question.Pipe dreams ease...
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Awesome. Love this piece. The atmosphere of the poem & photo work perfectly together.
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Thank you.
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The silence is loud. I like this. The flow of it.
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Thank you Fia. The silence is so loud, you hear your own thoughts sighing…
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Enjoy the silence. Always..Make the time you have a silent one. People and technology get in the way all the time. Great piece of writing Jade. Good to see you over here on the other side.
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Thank you kindly Adira, been there a few times myself and came to the conclusion that it’s best to move on..
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Thank you Vision, good to see you here too.
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Phenomenal write, Jade. So glad you made the journey to Stars Rite. Fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It does, doesn’t it? That is why most people are uncomfortable with it. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you Damian, I’m glad I did.
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.