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Read MoreI have grieved your absence longer than I've enjoyed your presence Yet every detail of your essence is meticulously engraved in each cell of my body.Our connection is so strong , I still feel the flow of your soul through...
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We learn a lot from pain and suffering.
Thank you for your kind comment! ⚘️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. A nice read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ⚘️
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Pain is physical….. suffering is mental.
Let suffering go, not easy, but you’re the one hurting yourself.
Very powerfully and intelligently crafted piece.🙏
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You are correct, pain eventually goes away. Suffering can take a lifetime to heal…
Thank you for the comment Peter ⚘️
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(check spelling on ‘through’ 3rd sentence)
So, the first line of this poem is captivating and sets the tone. It could almost be a poem unto itself. I like how you explore this relationship for the reader, the feelings and dissolved expectations… the emptiness left and the questions we never want to be answered.
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Haha you can tell my first language isn’t English. I will correct that…
Thank you for the comments.⚘️
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Thank you kindly for the comment, I just was able to let go, after 10 years….🫣⚘️
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Cheers! 😅
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She may be the bookmark in your book. Keep it “)
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Lucky guy
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Subtle calm falling over the reader
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Thanks folks for reading and commenting…..luv youse all💋
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This is an interesting read. I keep going back to “Touch the dark and explain yourself “I mean to explain to the darkness why you had to touch it. makes me think. Nice Brenda;))
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hello beautiful Fia I guess I’m talking about the dark and while doing it its interest is peaked and it asks me to explain myself thank you for your interest 💕
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thank you Jacqui for reading lovely poetess and sharing your thoughts 💕
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Darkness is the thorns, surrounding the rose. Beautifully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I love the poetic comment 💕
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Powerful work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
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Read MoreIt's grey today outsideIt matches my somber moodWith feelings of melancholy, I feel weighed downYou would think the rain would signify cleansing to meAnd the raindrops by themselves wouldIt's the grey depression I can't takeweeks that drag on under...
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Pain is a universal emotion to be cherished.
A language we feel, yet speak not one word of.
It’s beautiful really.
Just like your words.
Thank you.