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Read MoreShe had these little cupsof coffee for eyes, and Ishould have stayed upall night.Love is a drunk whore.A lie from Saturn.Venus, slither back in theocean where you belong.Loneliness is a knife cuttingmy balls off.Knowledge arrived with analarm clock from...
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Thanks, Willow.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks
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Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
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I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.
It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Read MoreThe skin registers the wind,draws the shadow in the instant,absorbs silences in scattered pores. Each fold holds an echo,no name brands,cycles buried under minimal gestures. Time drags cells,erases contours,replaces faces without asking permission. The mirror hesitates, rejects the reflection,forget that it was...
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Its a thought few people look at closely. Our skin walks us through the world & experiences so much, tells so many stories. And that last line…truth
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😎❤
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Incredible write my friend, so glad you’re here. I missed reading these gems you pen. Appreciate you.
Damian
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❤😎
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Our skin becomes thicker & thicker as we age and witness the impurities of life. Excellent piece PAR. Great to see you.
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😎❤
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Read MoreHe wakes at dawn with ink-stained hands, a mind ablaze yet feet in sand. Each word he scrawls a fleeting spark devoured whole before it’s dark. He writes of love, he writes of death. He writes of time, he writes...
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This is so true! It always seems to me that nobody loves poetry except poets. And we couldn’t breathe if we couldn’t write…
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Thanks my dear.
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! The life of a writer my friend, you described it perfectly. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Love to you always.
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We live for it. We bleed words & ink. Excellent piece my friend. Always………
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We do, my beloved friend.
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WE are… Love to you!
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Fia Naturie and
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Read MoreIn this cafe, with dirt for wallpaper. The heat is a bitch, and the fan in the ceiling is the worst— turning counter-clockwise. Sipping on my cup of coffee and milk. Too many flies, buzzing, fighting over throne, fighting over food, fighting over fly-chicks. Whatever they are fighting for— only that...
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Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.
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A hot and lonesome summer day. “)
Thank you, Fia!
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Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀
Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)
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I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy
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Yeah. I am sorry you can relate to this. Thanks, willlow for reading! “)
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Thats what it was called back then. “)
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Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! Highly appreciated! “)
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Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.
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I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)
Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)
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Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.
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Bubble gum flavour id gross! I disagree. But hearing of cotton candy green seedless grapes, I think you are right about the bubble gum flavour in there. Hahaha.
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LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?
You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?
You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.
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Lol. I saw your poem after our fellow poet: visions_of_insanity’s recommendation for ice cream. It ended up another type of ice cream. Lol
No. But I liked the reference. I had another poem that I have lost, where I referenced Nirvana’s Smells like teen spirit.
Mosquito’s wings here symbolize inferiority. For their tiny wings comparing with flies. Idk why it came to my mind. But I used it.I didn’t know about the contest. The setting of this poem is in a cafe but the themes has nothing to do with coffee.
I don’t remember this scene. I think I’ll rewatch it one day.
Thank you for reading and for the comments, DK. “)
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Powerful work, my friend.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
Now, you see where mosquito wings can carry you!-
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Mosquito wings comes with mosquito responsiblities. The limitless ability of sucking. Hahaha
Thank you, DK! “)
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Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.j.
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Thank you Jacob! Appreciated. “)
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From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this