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Read MoreI stumble over metaphorsb/c language isn’t enough for youand silence is too muchbut I should probably say…I’m spillin out all over the placeall tangled up in half formed thoughtsdraggin my feelins thru the dirtto try to make them look...
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appreciate that
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hello dearest poet I’ve always enjoyed the way you write just something special about it 💕
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I really appreciate that.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brenda, I cannot imagine the pain you’re going through. Losing a parent is nothing compared to losing a child. My heart and prayers with you. You can do him justice now for holding onto all the memories and writing about them. I hope that helps a lil’.
Daniel
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hello Daniel thank you for the love I don’t want to quit writing but I can’t get past my sadness in it 💕
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Your beautiful tribute Brenda is heavenly. My thoughts go out to you. xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith I don’t want to be sad anymore but it occurs to me I am altered I deeply appreciate your presence and love here 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian I appreciate the love here 💕
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hello beautiful Angel thank you what a tender and loving song…it’s very hard I keep remembering the day he was born and his milestones I miss him…I want to quit being sad but I don’t know how…I appreciate you listening 💕
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Read MoreYou were worried aboutthe storm, so youinvited it in,wanting to control thedamage through yourkindness and friendship.But you can't.The storm doesn't havea conscience.It will never be a cutepet on your leash.
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So well said and powerfully executed. a fine poem.
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Much appreciated.
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hello dearest Thomas I think you are the storm powerful write 💕
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Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Incredible execution my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks.
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Thank you.
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Read MoreIt is still all that defines...all of these still uncrossed lines,boundaries I have not yet crossedin a life of die as of yet untossed. Having traveled the whole world,while keeping myself unfurled,I remain such a bundled mystery,with so much you...
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We are the only key bearers to own souls yes. Beautifully penned as usual S.
Daniel
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Tremendous.
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Powerfully penned, LDF. Honest and raw my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes. You are the only key to unlock the secret of me. That is so true. I love this piece. LDF
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Comes off to me as someone fighting depression. Finding away to move forward. Or maybe that’s just me hehe.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m sure depression is one of the crucial ingredients in the mix. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Life is hard because of those rich fucks in Washington. Great piece. Well said!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They sure as hell don’t help matters. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic work. Powerful.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Omg, there are so many layers to this one. I read the comments above mine & saw where each came from. This one is a head tilted, brain-teaser. I see isolation, slight inspiration skirting around the edges, darkness peering though & the inevitability of death. I haven’t figured out an improvisation for that one yet. My daughter has decreed I’m not allowed to die though. Not sure that’s gonna workout for her but she says “that’s a you problem, figure it out.” If you know a cheat code on that, I’d be grateful if you’d share, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think you’re pretty much spot on in your analysis, there are multiple elements in there for sure. Usually is in my writes. lol. I don’t know a cheat code, I don’t think there is one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic!