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Thank you Joe. Isn’t it beautiful how music connects the world? Were all looking at the same moon river
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What a well done, strong write. Poetry is so broad, so I look for what moves me, and makes me nod, with approval.
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Appreciate the continued support Styx. I just enjoy grappling with words and metaphors.
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Cleverly penned, Ghosteen. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the kind words Damian
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Read MoreSummer lingers Days still sunny and warm And time, it seems to crawl As seasons drift to fall Golden haze hangs over distant fields Thoughts of you slipping through the veil Of passing days and hours While trees hold...
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What a gorgeous piece.🌹🌾
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Thank you. Love and nature belong together, in my mind. 🌼
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I told you I was seeking peace of mind. 🌼
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hello dearest Joe you are one of the most beautiful writer I’ve ever known I’m honored to be here with you 💕
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And you my friend write beauty all your own. We’re like puzzle pieces helping bring a more beautiful picture together 🌼
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that’s a wonderful thought for my soul 💕
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Well, you desire thoughts of wonder and beauty, isn’t that what you give? 🌼
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I don’t know I just go where I’m led I do my best there is a flow to some of them that is luck you have the artist touch of a musician and a master of words 💕
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Thank you, Brenda. That was a beautiful compliment – but be careful not to over inflate my ego.too much!🌼
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And nature is where I find it. 🌼
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You put a beautiful touch on that wonderful time in-between the seasons, especially Summer to Fall, when the ground has cooled down enough to lay on it again. I’m not trying to get too comfy…there are more scorchers on the horizon. But Fall is the best. Thumbs up ^
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I hear you, I’m ready to hit some trails without dying of heat stroke! Fall will be here quick enough. Good to have you back around! 🍁
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You take simplicity and develop stark imagery. I like the easy flow of your work.
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Thank you. Nature and the beauty of women are the wine of life, to be savored at ease. Sometimes I capture that.
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Read MoreBeyond the breakers where the tides never reach, we watched a small child flying two kites and you said ‘that could be me and you’ Born still, midwife's mouth turned to scissors delivering the cruellest cut Sometimes, the sun rises in my bedroom at midnight the TV...
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Thank you’ I will not let death become me, until the grim reaper reads my rites.
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Read MoreI never asked to shoulder your weightBut here I amWith every burden I takeYou don’t give a damnYou assume I don't feelBecause you read what I wroteYou assume I am healedYou're wrong. I stand here brokeI strive every day to...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Could feel these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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There is true and honest pain here, so palpable I can almost touch it.
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Thank you Detritus ☺️
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A powerful piece written with heart blood. An empath can feel what is Hidden behind the words. Vibrations speak louder and clearer than words. Great work Fia!
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Thank you, Sappho, appreciate that:))
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One of the hardest things is trying to help and being pushed away.
Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick;))
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So true. I can write it down…to give me release for the moment at hand. But somethings live on forever. You can’t delete it. I wish I could. Oh no! Another thought coming on!!!
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I just wrote Edit My Life after writing my comment.
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Haha you were inspired? cool
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It seems that a lot of times, when I comment on someone’s work, the way I relate turns into my own next submission.
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It happens to me sometimes. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks
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I feel this. The weight of another persons sorrow. A moving piece.
Kind regards
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Thank you, James;))
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Read Moresound check and roll filmevery moment captured in memoryblack and white sorrow caught in stillifeamazing journey through the hurtblue tears streak a child's facemomma's gone and daddy became my heroyou know he tried so hard to protect me from...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words pulled on these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply on this I appreciate you 💕
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Your words have a way of slicing below the surface, to the core. The last two lines remind me of the lyrics, “ it’s better to burn out than it is to rust”. Keep shining, my friend.
I sincerely hope to meet you on the other side!
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thank you graciously dearest Gus for feeling me so deeply it’s appreciated 💕
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Clever word play. I especially like the transition:
“In moon river dreams, my limbs drifted
from pillow to ache within the attic”
Excellent write.