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Read MoreI can contemplate too much read my rhythms far too oftensit so still that birds might landon my skin that will not soften.Age brings wisdom so they sayI'd suggest that's quite some lying What it brings is just reflectionCan't...
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Thanks for the comment.
I’ve been putting of getting back in the pool for ages.It was great in but bloody freezing getting out.
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A great write, for a rhyming one at that. I actually left work early to rush home and complete a poem that I was scrapping together at work. And then I went to the (community) pool! A productive day, lol.
Your write is well stocked with reflection and insight. I enjoyed it very much.-
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Thanks Styx for the comment.
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
It’s a whimsical piece but says enough about the journey I and many others are on.
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I really enjoyed reading this.
The first verse was immense.
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Thank you for your kind words
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Read MoreTo be English Is to be An immigrant To be an immigrant Is to be Human We are all Immigrants Descendants Of Africa
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If only we could all remember that particularly when it comes to refugees.They were called immigrants once upon a time.
Good write 👍
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Thanks for reading
Yes I agree. America is a nation of immigrants. The founding fathers were descendants of immigrants.Even the native American peoples immigrated across the frozen seas of the north pole.
Regards James
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There are those who do not accept that they are immigrants and try their best to fit in and hide. This piece can definitely start a conversation. Nice
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Thanks for reading.
We have a man called Nigel Farage in the UK.
He is the face of anti immigration and he is the grandson of a German immigrant to the UK.
I hope to clarify with this simple statement.Regards James
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Read MoreToo often have those shocking, fatalistic images haunted me;too often have I been forced to confront the unimaginable;emotions flung aside while practicality rode out each storm.Now, the thoughts of those could-have-beens and might-still-bestwist and turn on themselves,bending my mind...
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This is very good.
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So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
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Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece. -
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I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.
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Read Moremornin has found me vibratinat a frequency beyond fleshthe dream’s cliff still present in my cellsmy body pulsin with its beautythe euphoria moves like a livin thinggatherin power beneath my skinfloodin thru my chesttil I’m channelin somethin divinemy fingertips...
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You do have a way of keeping the reader in this series.
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appreciate it. it’s gotten me writin.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Always dig the depth and layers in your work my friend. I’m really digging this series as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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really appreciate that Damian. means a lot.
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Read MoreTouching the dark I move closer to you,wicked indulgence, my crave for you,a lusty desire to seduce. Captivated, you look at me with hungerthe night is jealousand pushes shadows onto my soul where you look deeply,and realize the demoness I am,provoking...
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Passionately penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An amazing collaboration. With, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hi dearest Benny enjoy your swim let the rest go stay in the moment great write 💕