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Read MoreThe body rests, but the theater continues.The curtain of sleep closes,and behind it, the stage remains lit.The dream does not bow to fatigue,does not bend to biology,does not dissolve in the chemistry of melatonin.It is something else.It is the...
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Thank you, I try my best to invite everyone into my poetic adventures in PARland. 😎
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Wow… like this
” Sleep is a gesture,
a ritual of disconnection,
but the dream is the saboteur of silence.”
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Sending my love to you.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! Riveting imagery, written as only you can my friend. Simply amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sending my love to you, dear friend.
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Inspiring, transcending, mesmerizing, infinite. I’m hooked. PARland sounds mind blowing.
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We must keep on acting to feed reality with our half-dreams.
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The liquid form is the most adaptable and dangerous of all, so we must keep our emotional liquidity under surveillance.
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Read MoreEyes tip-toeing over flotsam of sleeping habitat to the hills that follow This is closest we ever get to foreplay nests her head on my shoulder I imagine we’re lost in the country no land, no landmark only black and solid hills as compass like walking through...
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Love the feel of this. Reminds me of this song by S&G…..https://video.search.yahoo.com/search/video?fr=mcafee&p=poem+on+the+underground+simon+and+garfunkel&type=E210US752G0#id=2&vid=6df47f303922526d0faa70e1eaeed172&action=click
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Thank you J. Flattered. Song is universal.
Work this out. I’m Welsh first, British second and my beautiful Dad was English. We’re a complicated bunch across the Atlantic. I stand against the heinous Empire and her jingoistic bs. Other than that, I’m very easy going. Lol. This song / anthem is central to my poetic heart. Subtitles are provided!
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Thank you for sharing your song.
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This poem is beautifully vivid and cinematic. I love how you blend the quiet of the night, the train platform, and motion with personal reflection. The imagery of film and landscape creates a strong, lingering atmosphere – really well done.
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Thank you – or ‘Diolch’ as some say in my homeland. I’m just a metaphor whore really, who finds catharsis on the release of life onto keyboard.
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you are a very passionate lover I can tell I’m telling you ths as I blush I know I’ve known you for years ❤️
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“Liquid childhood” interesting what that conjured up for this reader.
I rarely remember dreams anymore and they are never about the past anymore…used to be. But now they are of some unnamed future and often I don’t even recognize me in the dreams…
At my older age, I surrender to sleep and let it do whatever it wants with me.
Really good write here PAR. You bring us along with you, but not just as observers, more like participants.
j.