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Read More25th wakes upwith the taste of lies still warm on its tongue. Not grand lies,not operatic betrayals,but the small,intimate ones,the ones spoken softly,the ones wrapped in promises,the ones that sound like hopeuntil they don’t. This is the daywhen the month feelsan...
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Thank you my dear, I’ve been working very hard on those April fools daily news. Love!
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. So much depth and character in this excellent write my friend. Another journey is complete until tomorrow. Amazing read as always brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love, brother!
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Be very welcome to my funhouse of Aprils. Thank you!
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Day of Unbearable Truths
25th wakes up
with the taste of lies
still warm on its tongue.Not grand lies,
not operatic betrayals,
but the small,
intimate ones,
the ones spoken softly,
the ones wrapped in promises,
the ones that sound like hope
until they don’t.This is the day
when the month feels
an unbearable pain,
a b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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After the realization comes the pain and agony. Nicely written PAR. Why do bad things seem to always happen on the 25th???
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It’s a secret of nature…
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Damian DeadLove posted in the group Music is Art
“Burned out the TV set
Burned outta sex
I ain’t trashed
I’m fucking wrecked.”– Sammy Hagar
In a Sammy Hagar mood tonight. This was a drinking song back in the day. Enjoy.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Holding Hands
When they began
They held hands
They smiled
They illuminated the skyChairs were held
Giggles slipped freely
And the thought of
What base is a good one for this dateTime goes by
Rings were bought
Vows were said
In laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr. McCoyEvery step in life taken
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There is a motion, a movement to everything, to life. It has a direction and it is forward, not backward. For love to last, it has to change as the people involved change and as the world around them change. I have found this is how love, or any relationship, evolves, strengthens and continues. It is fun to remember the way we were, but even more…Read More
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I do not mind at all. I love the responses I receive from my poems.
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Read MoreWhen they beganThey held handsThey smiledThey illuminated the sky Chairs were heldGiggles slipped freelyAnd the thought ofWhat base is a good one for this date Time goes byRings were boughtVows were saidIn laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr....
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I enjoyed this one. Without a doubt, if holding hands is how it ends…I would not change a thing.
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Thank you Angel Louise;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Dig the Star Trek reference by the way. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz. I am a Star Trek fan lol:))
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“Would you ever want the loop to end?“
That’s a great, almost philosophical question. Some people like to escape a loop because they only see the endless repetition of the same actions. To me it holds the chance to experience new aspects of old routines on the basis of familiar facts. It’s adventurous and reliable at the same time.
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Thank you Sappho;))
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I recently had a co worker/friend who lost her husband. He was a young guy too. I read this feeling like you could have wrote this for them, and my heart breaks all over. Thank you for this sad beautiful read.
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Thank you Brandon;))
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Powerful and poignant. Great write.
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Thank you Thomas;))
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Wow a lot of times if the love and bond is that strong it would be hard to live without them.
I know a friend who recently past a few months after because he couldn’t live without his beloved wife.Powerful great write
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That does happen. If the bond is that strong. thank you Lizz:))
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Finding a soul mate is hard enough in a lifetime but then losing them?
Yes, that ending line does beg the question many people would agree to.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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Well Damn Par. That is deep and I like how you broke it down and brought it home with her character. Loved this