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Read MoreAnd finally, you did the obvious.You cut your nails.You did things so seemingly without meaning. And yet, as you swept away the dustfrom one gesture to the next,you opened a tiny crack.Almost nothing, almost a laughthrough which an ancient wind...
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Thanks 🌻
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Cleverly penned, PAR. Phenomenal write my friend there is always depth and layers to your work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my brother. 🌻
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Chère C.,
How can you be so productive and, at the same time, be so consistent in quality?
Looks like I enjoy everything you write.
Just a note from the far away fanclub.
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Aww, no sad bittersweet stuff!
Okay, this is good and it hits the heart in the center. I feel it, through your words.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This write has a gentle sting to it.
You do both so well. Gentle and sting.
I love when you blend Brenda.
Just the right amount of bittersweet.Merry Christmas!
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Read MoreAs the evening stretches beyond skyscrapers sunset cracks windows and voices, midnight lies as a would-be lover counting her footsteps across Brooklyn Bridge to an anonymous apartment, where she imagines waking to her lipstick on his coffee cup Washing machine skies spin skeins of colour red always bleeds into the blue and JFK...
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Dear R,
The visual and imagined images are outstanding in this piece. For me, there such a sense of coping with life especially at Christmas. You incorporate iconic structures of NY throughout giving this an energetic current running underneath the words from start to finish. I really enjoyed seeing the people, appreciating the buildings and mostly the confessional admission within the piece. Fab write. H🌷
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As someone once sang, it’s been a good year for the roses. Heart upon heart, life below humility, Christmas 2025 once seemed a distance away. It was only true friendship & family who drove my sleigh. Maybe, one day, I will become a poem. Huge Welsh hugs and thanks H. x
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The opening catching one’s imagination as you tell us a story through poetry. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you Fia and many plaudits for your perennial encouragement of writers. Wising you a blessed yuletide.
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Well now, this is quite a large gift for us readers. Definitely weighty but not overdone. It brings so much to light, as you build the “Blade Runner” scenery throughout.
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Never considered the blade runner angle and this is why I always hope to submit on poetry sites. Everyone reads their own perspective. Thank you Mark.
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The original Blade Runner is a fantastic, epic movie. Your write belongs with it, including in value.
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Read Morelaughter of hate, inside me debating whether to stay or leavecallous affection is the affliction, as of latemorose of feeling, with lust shown for others and for me nonededicated need holds me to youa love that hurts dictates desireinside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Heartfelt write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
A thumbs up from the Netherlands.
And what do the world famous Macs says?
I’m loving it.
Your writes I mean. I’m not eating the Macs.
I hope your Tuesday will be marvellous, Gus
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Read MoreThe alleys reek of rum and pine trees,neon bar signs croon atwisted Christmas Carol,people grin, dragging bags ofanxiety and presents,slamming doors behind them likea drunk drummer boy. I sit at the bar, empty glass, empty heart,watching snow waltz across thelonely...
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Superb piece of Xmas cheer that makes the reader thirsty for more. A clever write that brings images I would love to see in an old Twilight Zone or Night Gallery episode. Your work is always exceptional.
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Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent Xmas write my friend. I pictured the Santa as Billy Bob Thornton. Too much Bad Santa I guess. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Lol. Thank you.
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There’s a quality to your pieces that feels very much like a storyteller who shares bits of life as he passes. You take us there, without frills, and deposit us in the scene. Always a treasure to read your words
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Thank you, so much.
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hello dearest Par this is deep that you take notice of such things tells me how wonderful you are ❤️