Great title

Pleasure journey

BIG LIKE

Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.

I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!

Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥

I like this style of erotica.

damn. excellent write.

Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.

xoxo

This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))

Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.

Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀

Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)

I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy

Thats what it was called back then. “)

Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.

Damian

Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.

I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)

Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)

Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.

LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?

You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?

You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.

Powerful work, my friend.

Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
Now, you see where mosquito wings can carry you!

Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.

j.

This was a great piece Damian. They should have a cemetery for these classic muscle cars. I love the look, the sound and the performance of these cars from the 60’s and 70’s. Great piece of writing Damian.

Okay, I’m gonna admit it. This brought me to tears. The memories I have of wandering salvage yards with daddy, scavenging parts for his current car project, are some of the most precious for me. Daddy’s little grease monkey. I can smell the old interiors & rust still. Thank you for the journey back, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Cool, my first car was a Camaro. I love cars & trucks even though I’m not mechanical at all. lol. When I need to relax I watch YouTube for the Car revival shows. A guilty pleasure I guess. lol. Never enough time. Appreciate you.

Damian

A metaphorical genius you are indeed, bro.
When those memories hit!!!..Like a Rolodex of the mind
Can’t say enough about this vibe!!

much respect

Naaj

You don’t know what you got till it’s gone. Most cars today look like cheap matchbox cars. Great ink.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I knew you liked this one, and you’re very welcome. So wonderful to see you my friend. I’ve missed your writes and commentary. Appreciate you.

Damian