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Read MoreI feel it in the waterwaking my slumber the vibration incantationthat of my lover and his Harley revving his throttleupon my water rooftop doormy sonar invitation. that’s headed toward the shore Time to ride quickly reaching for my starfish...
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Hey Damien!
Thank you for that. He just got home from a bike fest.
How could I not post this! Lol
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Great job with this… tight stanzas… great flow… I’m sure he will love it
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He better! Hahaha
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I don’t need a harley. You’re all the excitement that I can handle! Your enthusiasm and sincere curiosity towards things is so addictive to me. It’s what I needed in my life!
Oh, and the fact that you are a writer too, as well as an artist with digital imagery, just cements the deal!Thanks for the smile that I got from this read. And the thoughts! You made quite a Splash… lol
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I love that movie!! You know this!
Everything in this write reminds me of us.
How could I not post, especially knowing you were going to a bike fest.
Thanks for all the pics you sent.
What can I say, you make me curious. lol
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This was fun read. I hope you enjoyed the Tequila
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Hi Fia!
I enjoy tequila if it’s on Mark’s lips! Hehehehe
It was fun writing. Had a whole vision in my head and went with it.Thanks for stopping by for a comment:)
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You’re welcome. Sorry, been busy.
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No need to apologize:). You are on a mission to build something. You go girl!
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I love the soft rhymes and whimsical flow — the poem beautifully mixes playful with intimate longing, like a tide carrying desire and anticipation.
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Hi Roma.
Thank you. I’ve seen a few motorcycles with a mermaid spray painted on the tank.
Wouldn’t it be cool if they were able to come alive!It was a vision I saw playing out in my head so I wrote it down. A mermaid swimming towards her
lover who happens to own a Harley. The motor is so loud she hears it even underwater:)Thanks for checking this out!
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Oooo! This is SO sweet! I will love anything with mermaids! and when I was reading along your poem, I was thinking that mermaids and motorcycles (or let’s us say the RIDER of motorcycle😎) would make a unique amazing couple! this was fun to read, I bet Mark was smiling when he read it as I’m smiled too😊.
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Aww thank you. I wrote this when I had this image of a mermaid sleeping in water. Her eyes pop open when she hears the harley motor vibrate the water. Up she goes getting all primed up for her date. lol
It was fun to write.
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What a lovely thought💖 and You are so welcome my Mermaid friend 🧜🏻♀️😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Sinisterly penned, Brenda. A powerful dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Read MoreBury meBeneath Currents of Glass Underneath the overpass On your way out of town So you can take one last glance Then forget your past And don’t look back You left me here Beneath currents of glass...
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Fantastic!
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Hi Adagio
Thank you!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, this one has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damien:)
Thank you. I wanted to try something different when I first wrote.
From the victim perspective. Giving her a voice.
I’m glad you enjoyed:)
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![Profile picture of S. Libellule]()
Truly engaging… tight lines… smooth rhyming
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Thank you!
Wanted to try something different and from a victim perspective.
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There’s two of you!? What!
No way, you’re as original as they come sweetheart!
I’ve always enjoyed reading your material, obviously. It was what reeled me in to begin with. This write of yours shows your diversity in themes and mood too. Not too dark, but plenty of shadowy imagery to compel the reader to peek.
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Hey babe,
Sometimes you write something and wonder if you should post. This was one of those writes. I posted it on
DUP a long time ago and heard about the whole Houston thing. It reminded me of this write so I put it back out in the writing universe. lol. Thanks for being my rock honey. You are priceless! -
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Well I identify as a rock, but we both know that I’m a stick. LOL
Smooch!
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Read Morecombelling darkness give me chillssinsiter slice cuts right through meerotic mayhem makes me lustmonsters of the horde recognizeI'm dancing on the peripherythey're watching intentlysilenc talks to mewhispering madness secrets to be kepta grey entered my sunshine long agomy vulnerability...
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So dark… loved it!
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thank you dearest Daniel I appreciate you ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Darkly penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreturn up the heat this is just getting gooda hex is upon my lipsa promise is spilling from my hipstwisted sorrow, a cunted cursesulking in the shadows never to beholdsacrifice sanity and get in the moodaltered faith in your...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously good evening ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Always a joy to hear a love story about you and Mark. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian