I feel it in the water
waking my slumber
the vibration incantation
that of my lover
and his Harley
revving his throttle
upon my water rooftop door
my sonar invitation.
that’s headed toward the shore
Time to ride
quickly reaching for
my starfish hair clips
drawn into the current I slide
ready for my road trip
Breaching the surface
waving a wink with my tides
I know he sees me
racing towards him
glistening with pastel moonlight
can’t wait to meet him
and his tequila shot kiss
goes perfect with
my salt sprinkled lips
every time I hear him
playing his Harley serenade
I realize nothing is better
than Motorcycles & Mermaids
Beautifully penned, Adel. Always a joy to hear a love story about you and Mark. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Hey Damien!
Thank you for that. He just got home from a bike fest.
How could I not post this! Lol
Thanks for checking this out amigo;)
Great job with this… tight stanzas… great flow… I’m sure he will love it
He better! Hahaha
Thank you 😊
I don’t need a harley. You’re all the excitement that I can handle! Your enthusiasm and sincere curiosity towards things is so addictive to me. It’s what I needed in my life!
Oh, and the fact that you are a writer too, as well as an artist with digital imagery, just cements the deal!
Thanks for the smile that I got from this read. And the thoughts! You made quite a Splash… lol
I love that movie!! You know this!
Everything in this write reminds me of us.
How could I not post, especially knowing you were going to a bike fest.
Thanks for all the pics you sent.
What can I say, you make me curious. lol
This was fun read. I hope you enjoyed the Tequila
Hi Fia!
I enjoy tequila if it’s on Mark’s lips! Hehehehe
It was fun writing. Had a whole vision in my head and went with it.
Thanks for stopping by for a comment:)
You’re welcome. Sorry, been busy.
No need to apologize:). You are on a mission to build something. You go girl!
I love the soft rhymes and whimsical flow — the poem beautifully mixes playful with intimate longing, like a tide carrying desire and anticipation.
Hi Roma.
Thank you. I’ve seen a few motorcycles with a mermaid spray painted on the tank.
Wouldn’t it be cool if they were able to come alive!
It was a vision I saw playing out in my head so I wrote it down. A mermaid swimming towards her
lover who happens to own a Harley. The motor is so loud she hears it even underwater:)
Thanks for checking this out!
Oooo! This is SO sweet! I will love anything with mermaids! and when I was reading along your poem, I was thinking that mermaids and motorcycles (or let’s us say the RIDER of motorcycle😎) would make a unique amazing couple! this was fun to read, I bet Mark was smiling when he read it as I’m smiled too😊.
Aww thank you. I wrote this when I had this image of a mermaid sleeping in water. Her eyes pop open when she hears the harley motor vibrate the water. Up she goes getting all primed up for her date. lol
It was fun to write.
Thanks for checking this out!
What a lovely thought💖 and You are so welcome my Mermaid friend 🧜🏻♀️😊