Bury me
Beneath Currents of Glass
Underneath the overpass
On your way out of town
So you can take one last glance
Then forget your past
And don’t look back
You left me here
Beneath currents of glass
Submerged in a lake
Someone you forgot to take
You’re driving so so fast
On cocaine lines
Trying to hide
All the ugly inside
You found yourself
Another different town
You took a real
Good look around
Found a beautiful dream
Heard her echo scream
In ripples that drowned
All the way down
My stranger sister
I felt death kiss her
Who looked just like me
My carbon copy
For heavens sake
Forget about the lake
Don’t leave her
Trapped like me
Bury her
Beneath Currents of Glass
Not beneath the overpass
Set her out to sea
Set her free
Fantastic!
Hi Adagio
Thank you!
Powerfully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, this one has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
Hey Damien:)
Thank you. I wanted to try something different when I first wrote.
From the victim perspective. Giving her a voice.
I’m glad you enjoyed:)
Truly engaging… tight lines… smooth rhyming
Thank you!
Wanted to try something different and from a victim perspective.
Criminal Minds sometimes freaks me out! Lol
There’s two of you!? What!
No way, you’re as original as they come sweetheart!
I’ve always enjoyed reading your material, obviously. It was what reeled me in to begin with. This write of yours shows your diversity in themes and mood too. Not too dark, but plenty of shadowy imagery to compel the reader to peek.
Solid write, super intriguing.
Hey babe,
Sometimes you write something and wonder if you should post. This was one of those writes. I posted it on
DUP a long time ago and heard about the whole Houston thing. It reminded me of this write so I put it back out in the writing universe. lol. Thanks for being my rock honey. You are priceless!
Well I identify as a rock, but we both know that I’m a stick. LOL
Smooch!