Sam Nash

Fia Naturie
6 months, 1 week ago

The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
Light💕
6 months ago

The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Light💕
    6 months ago
    
    You are welcome my friend 😊
Willow
6 months ago

Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Visions_of_Insanity
6 months ago

Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
goldenmyst
5 months, 3 weeks ago

This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.

John
- Damian DeadLove
  5 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
5 months, 3 weeks ago

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This is my Magic of Poetic Voice submission
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The Beast Confession
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·Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
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