beautifully written I felt this 💕

Best revenge, live happily ever happy without them holding a place inside you. Easy to say, I know. Yet, writing it out is also great therapy and makes you breathe better. Our success comes from trial and error. You succeed regardless.
Write it out amigo.

Beautifully penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I note you still have it .. exquisitely poemed good sir .. Regards to both you n ya pen .. Neville

Thomas this speaks to me of deep abiding beauty in a timeless land. The imagery of the robin just learning to use its wings taking flight on the Western wind is just sublime. Loved reading this tonight.

John

Awesome write, Thomas. It reminds me of Tangerine trees and marmalade skies.

Excellent Thomas 😎👍

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Speaking facts here, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

It flew though! Mine often slam into trees at least once. I love the way you gave the pen over & let it go

I agree with you, Thomas…that some poems actually write themselves, especially the ending, which I find to be quite surprising when the moment offers itself to me. I especially loved the eloquence and poetic nature of a “tangerine sky”. Wow, now why haven’t I ever thought of that? Good to have another transplant from the WC at the helm. Good seeing you, Thomas!

Good to see you. Thanks. Hello Poetry is another fantastic site.

This gives me old Korean movies with the monks or a person taking notes, sitting and writing, and people ignoring them as they go about having their conversations.
Interesting

Tremendous work, my friend.

Nice, pleasant work.

I see it as concern for a world that may be in trouble or a culture that may be disappearing.
Nice one Neville. (Relic)

I’m not sure if I got You right here, but in my mind I see it as the fear of writer’s block, maybe because I see myself here with the white pages waiting for words… Good Coffee Saturday ☕

That was sweet. Love forget me nots

Beautiful.

I love how you selected this little detail and penned a passionate piece around it. It’s the little things like this that motivate everything.

I enjoyed this. It’s a good read

Thanks for reading a large piece.
I am very glad you liked it.
It’s a rough idea.
We are all human.

Regards James