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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Thank you
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Read MoreMelancholy sits quietly and I with herwith a gentle remider to breathewe watch the cotton candy clouds flow byas we lie watching blue skiesa stark contast to our moodhurt on a colorful dayit seems wrong and out of placethe...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, really dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously I’m happy you liked it ❤️
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Lovely piece Brenda. The words are marvelously woven to create a delicate, fragile piece of poetry. xo
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hi dearest Keith good evening thank you my friend I can be gentle when I want to ❤️
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I wonder if that spider, doing what nature intended, ever said to himself – what a lovely day it is today?
Nice poem, crimsin.-
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I don’t know dearest Tim I believe if we listen we can hear nature and the earth talk…it is at all possible…everything has a frequency thank you for your thoughts ❤️
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Such a fine verse. I really needed that. TY & hugs+++
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hello dearest Jim thank you graciously I know my metaphors are funny I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Read MoreVoices of volcanic dustSecrets of yesterdayMelted passengersIn the air of PompeiiSweeping antenna beadsScooping up ashes Like holy hands Fleeing sooty pallbearers Nocturnal wanderlust Swarming with care Across Mount Vesuvius In molten lava-lightFloating Roman embersSeared patterns...
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Such lava!
The artwork is incredible! The write of course is so your style of unique phrasing. Clever wording to go with the picture, well, vice versa. Your talent is showing!-
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Thank you sweetie. Wanted to post some art. lol
I’ve been slacking on that aspect of my creative side.
I’m fixing to call you!
I’m grabbing some coffee first!-
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okay, i just fed my pet raccoons, lol.
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They are so cute!
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Wow… I really like this Adelphina.
It’s like you picked me up at the start and wasn’t going to put me down untill I finished it. And I’m glad you did. Amazing.-
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I’m glad you enjoyed! The whole reason artists make art is to move people.
Whether through words, art, or music. I’m glad to have payed it forward since you do the same for us here
on the site:). Thank you for stopping by!
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Very good… the art … the words … everything you do is very good as usual
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Hi Sam!
Thank you for that. Means a lot, seriously:)
I started taking digital art classes last year and this one was extra special to me so I thought I’d share.
Venturing into uncharted territory has its benefits!Thanks again!
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beautiful word choices and artwork lovely Adelphina ❤️
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Hello lovely:)
I’m so happy you enjoyed. Made my evening seeing you on my page chica!
It’s been an amazing experience learning new ways to express myself.
Thank you for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write my friend and the artwork compliments it nicely. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damien, amigo! Thank you!
This was an extra special write because it was such a sad historical event.
The remnants are still here for everyone to view. Not sure how I feel about that.
Having other peoples pain on display. Just feels like such an intrusion.But you know what is pretty cool to display, your rocking avatar’s hair!! Hahaha
Had to lighten up this comment, I meant no offense:)-
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None taken. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
The poetry & artwork gel so wonderfully here. Marvelously written Adelphina.
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Hey there! Poetry and artwork is my new jam!
Now it’s all I think about. lol
What would be something cool to make to accompany my poem!
I brainstorm to get ideas then get started.
Takes longer but I don’t mind.Thanks for stopping by
I’m super happy you enjoyed!
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I’ve seen the frozen bodies of Pompeii. he families that died together in their homes. I’m sure they would have been happy to have wings to fly away on. Great poem of butterflies and great art work, Adel. 🙂
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Hey Tim!
Hey, I’m Adelly to you mister! Where did she go? Hahah
With all the suffering that happened I wanted to make this poem bittersweet.
And I kept having these visions of moths flying around. Some are huge, as big as your hand!
Off my mind went and this is what I came up with. After I finished drawing my first moth, I felt like a proud mama! lol
I’m glad you enjoyed!Thanks for stopping by!
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Anytime Adelly. :))))
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Much better! Thanks buddy
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I was going to just call you deli. But then I’d have to order a sandwich from you.
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Good one! Hahaha.
I’m a huge subway fan!
Turkey on Italian herb and cheese bread!
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Powerful imagery. Superb work.
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Hi Thomas.
Thank you! I’m so happy you enjoyed:) -
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There’s absolutely nothing about this whole page that isn’t magical and I love it so ..
p.s. I’ve been to Pompeii several times and understand entirely where you & those moths are coming from .. 😎🦋🦋👍
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Hi Nev,
Thank you for that. Means a lot amigo. I can’t even imagine how it must have felt like, being there in person.
The fact that their remains are still in tact and have not broken down is astounding to me.Thank you for stopping by!
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You a more than welcome .. my pleasure entirely .. 😎
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This is pure art in motion. I could just lose myself in the beauty of your poem. I was mesmerized by the impressionist wonder within your poem. A real gem to read tonight.
John
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Hi John,
Thank you for that. Love the words impressionist wonder. With this piece I wanted to give some light even when everything feels so helpless. I’m happy you enjoyed the read.
Thanks for stopping by!
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Read More“The glass keeps us distant-yet so near, but so far On this Halloween night-I’m sitting in her car, “Red teeth stained as my jaws flexVampire sucking the foul blood from her discarded Kotex, “Watching...
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Delicious!
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In its own Peeping Tom type of way.
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Dude, we promise you’re a wild man, great visuals with this one dude
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I call it pull and release
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read Morepart one:All addictions start with suffering.All addictions end with suffering.part two:Addiction beginswhere silence screams.Voids filled withthe cold retreat of alcohol,tobacco’s dry whisper,the sharp thrill of cocaine,gambling’s pulse,screens pulsing past midnight,the slow hunger for shopping,the aching need for moisture from...
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hello dearest Benny my pain is just too great to live any other way I’ve really honestly tried more than once and I will never willingly put myself through that again… this is powerful if you have a better way to cope I am happy for you my friend ❤️
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The root cause of all suffering is thinking.That’s where the answer lies.
I coped by reading as much as I could about depression, grief,the way our minds work and trick is.The best material,without sounding religious,was in Buddhism.
Happy to share some authors with you if you’re interested.
🙏🙏🙏🙏
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Intelligent poem here dude. Well said and well executed.
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Brilliant work.
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More