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Read MoreAfter lacing my running shoes,I strode down the sidewalklike a ship plowing through the sea.Five miles, I thought, do or die. In the distance, I heard the cara mile away tearing through streets. He was a nuisance.He drove a 1970 Chevrolet...
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Thank you, very much for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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this reminds me of a pickup that used to race down my street you could hear him coming for miles but when he went by it was just a streak of an odd light I used to honestyly think it was Lucifer…it’s crazy…I really enjoyed this 💕
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Thanks Crimson. Lets hope he doesn’t come back to haunt you with his spinning wheels.
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Brilliantly penned, Tim. Love the flow and the imagery my friend, amazing storytelling as well. What a waste of a classic machine, assholes find a way to ruin everything they touch. lol. I’m also a car guy. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Much appreciated.
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Read MoreOne afternoon beneath a tree,my age no more than twenty-three,'pon Mary's supple, soft red cheekI placed a kiss that made me weak. In me, her charms endowed romancewith ev'ry quick, flirtatious glance.At every turn of every stroll,a kiss from her...
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Brilliant.
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I appreciate the comment, Thomas. Thank you.
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hello dearest Tim I love the rhythm and content of this write beautiful 💕
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Thank you Crimson. :))
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Truly an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian.
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Glad you’re back and posting erotica.
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This was quite creative. How he… the conceited king shriveled and you arose to be queen and well replenished off him, haha. Love it!
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I can see your disappointed with men from this and your previous poems. Scars can go pretty deep and disappointment can be frustrating. But your expression is always deep in itself. That’s what writing is for.
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Nice rhythm love the joker in batman creation
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Joker, is pure madness. lol. Funny enough the first two lines came from lyrics to an old song that J.J. Burton and I wrote together. The rest of the words weren’t up to par. But always loved those first two lines. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Welcome to Gotham.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Welcome to Gotham, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Why so serious? Lol 🃏
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Such an iconic Joker line. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s not really about the Joker, to be truthful. The first two lines are from an old song that was just a silly song that J.J. Burton and I penned the words to in like 1993. But I always liked the first two lines, so I just wrote something else to them. He mentioned the Joker because he was a fan, and I just used that to make the first two lines. lol. A little backstory for you, I always ramble on. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I really liked this one I guess the joker would kind of be Lucifer always laughing at peoples pain really your poem rocks as they do anyway 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think the joker could be Lucifer, but I was also thinking that darker side we all have inside. Really it could apply to any form of a personal demon, different to each person. Sorry for rambling. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The first thought I have is a person or boss egging you on while you struggle.or just being smug. Laughing at your pain kinda thing.
Great ink, friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s also a possibility, it could kinda be that person that’s a thorn in my side. Great commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As usual, I may be reading this wrong. But I’m feeling a sense of apathy is just as deadly as hate/evil. Those who don’t speak up for others, give their silence as a voice to the bullies. It definitely has my mind going, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, you always have cool insight to the meaning, always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More...In Pink SatinTo the tune of...NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN (Moody Blues)--------------------------‐Femboi in pink satin...with pearls in hiz ears...motioning deftly...to the other sweet dears!He sees hiz beauty...but thats only hiz eyes...all the cis people...see a rainbow disguise!There's no longer a...
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Excellent!
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Well, Damn, both things met their end. Very interesting poem. Nice;))