hello dearest poet this is so beautifully written brimming with feeling and the gift of writer ❤️

“…splashing alliteration on the pages of your heart.” My, my, how poetically defined! I love your sonnets. What a gift you have of writing them!

Your love Sonnets are like flowers… each has its own sweet scent, beauty and allure. This is gorgeous.

a pure masterpiece dearest Clive I am utterly enchanted ❤️

you’re so dark dearest Benjamin intiguing ❤️

This poem is heavy. Dark and intriguing. Nice work.

I imagine a grotto with the rocks are covered in with orange red seaweed. Then again, I see a grunion run when they come out of the sand, and the eyes look almost blue black

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Benjamin I love your style I have chills❤️

This is a beautiful compilation of imagery in this form

To write a whole poem as haikus/senryus is outstanding! that’s a talent, I remember reading some poets composing few verses as haikus/senryus but not long as yours here, and most of your verses can stand alone as it is. I could feel here how nature is angry and speaking to now world where humans played with its rawness, the old genuine days against the new fake days, at the end the writer seemed to be fed up and welcoming the end if this end means the end of all madness, maybe then a new earth will be born.

A life well lived…

Much respect

Naaj

Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian