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Read MoreAmong the rain drops I walkSkin barely soaked while I talk Apparently to no one Alone yet so combined in my thoughtsI choose to believe I’m being mocked Apparently by no one Acid rain for the people walking byFriendly faces warm the hearts...
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I’m so glad you liked it!
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Hoi Drieks,
Love to see you (r work) again.
And about things that are close to my heart.Alle kleine beetjes helpen!
Keep them coming please!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Hey Gus!
As always, thank you for taking time to read, listen and comment!
Groetjes!
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics and the perfect arrangement to accompany it musically. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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Hi Drieks!
Enjoyed the music as always. Had to stop by for a listen:)-
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Thank you for stopping by! I appreciate you a lot Adelphina 🙏🏻
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Love it, to tasty
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This is so beautiful, dear Drieks! The music and the lyrics compliment each other perfectly. I enjoyed it very much!
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Thank you so much for your kind words Sappho!
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Benjamin Scraps and
Light💕 are now friends
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Benjamin Scraps wrote a new post
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Read MoreDrawing space, the beast lurks neargrit to wit in creep of dreampoor as dust on golden tearcarving eyes that shout & beamgroaning lines of spine & placedaze in sweet for kiss or bitemusky cloak of dusk & lacestars to...
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hello dearest poet I really enjoyed the style and subject matter here ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This write hits like a Mack truck my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Writes like this are quite difficult for the most of us. So few even try. Yet you did and you did it very well. The rhymes are solid and well thought out. Most of the cadence is kept moving fluidly. Along with an interesting storyline to boot.
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incredibly penned…compelling. your imagery captivating,
you weave words with amazing fluidity. i too very much enjoyed your topic & style.
~ chantepleure
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Seriously, I really like this.