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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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Read MoreI’m not weak. And to be honest, I’m not strong either.. I’m the perfect balance of both; I’d bet that you are neither. Your weakness of the flesh, with your emotions suppressed, drowning in temptation, but oh sweet baby, I’ve not tempted you yet. I’m resistant to...
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Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!
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Thank you xx
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The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.
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Defiance is one of my strong suits. Thank you, dearest Fia. xx
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Well phrased battle of wills 🌼
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I appreciate it. xx
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Great flow and a very smart human, to tight
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I thank you dear. xx
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Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…💋
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Absolutely Peter, you get it. The price is too high, and I am too cheap. 😉 Thanks for reading. xx
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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you. Wasn’t there a saying about defiant girls? Or does my memory fail me? lol xx
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Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!
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Keith, you are always appreciated my dear friend. Thank you for reading. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dearest Damian, I have to keep things exciting. Thank you for reading, it’s always a pleasure. xx
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Read MoreI'm breathing Can you hear me I'm being advised from beyond No Not Ai I'm getting messages Telling me to write you The engines lost power We're gliding It's beautiful above the clouds Serene Magical I don't think much when I write you It's instinct That's what I work on I'm getting messages telling...
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Digging the ethereal feeling in this. Hope you’re doing well sir.
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The poems are starting to appear in my brain jar again Wally
She gives me a lot to write about…
Stay tuned Wally
Hope all is good on your side !!
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hello dearest Poet you are so sexy when you are being beautiful it’s great to see you ❤️
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I don’t come here often Brenda but once in awhile a poem will come to me and I pen it. Sometimes I get excited that I actually wrote something again. On DUP they came fast and furious but now I have to wait for the magic to appear.
Appreciate your comment Brenda.
You’re so sweet
Thanks❤️
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Beautifully penned, Speak. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The desire to write happens occasionally now and I’m grateful for it ..
Thx D
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Listen to the messages. Keep writing. I enjoy it
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Trying Fia
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Would’ve loved some of your artwork along with this piece, we’re all missing boxhead. Tight
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Yeah, boxhead needs to get it together.
They’re comfortably numb and living the good life while their Master is working hard …Thx Me
Stay tuned
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Dear PS,
I feel ya on the process of writing since DU. I enjoyed this romantic side and ride. So glad your muse has spoken.
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Dear H,
It’s just a change of scenery and site but somehow it didn’t translate like that.
At DUP my mind was always ablaze but here it’s a tug and pull.
Still I try
When the notion comes I write it fast and edit later ….So nice to see you H
I hope you’re well !!
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Speak! Poet! Poetspeak, another great write. So nice to read something of yours again. Hold on to that inspo, it’s working in or favor. 😉
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Wow it’s PG
You are the Goddess of words here.
Sexy words I might add ..Appreciate your comment
Stay tuned
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In the words of, well, you…
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I love your avatar PG
DAMN
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Thank you darling, it’s just little ol me. 😉 x
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Of course I want more !
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It’d be my pleasure. xx
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Phenomenal !
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Read MoreThey say,is the history we learn fully true?What did they call eachother,through and through?And historical books say friends,buddies. And whatnot.While the true term slowly fade and rot.Friends,sidekicks or even your own bloodline. But maybe if we look closer in the little...
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Read MoreYou wouldn’t think lonelinesscould breathe between our warm bodies,not when we lie naked togetherclose enough to feel each others breath. But it can.And sometimes, it does.I lie beside you,listening for your soft drift into sleep,hoping,almost praying,that your hand will wander,and...
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This is seriously lovely and not only took my breath away but replaced some of the cold of a very cold day with some much needed warmth .. Neville
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Thank you Neville.
Words that make others warm are the best words.🙏
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This is very nice.
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment.🙏
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx