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Read MoreAugust 13, 1788 Mon Cher Donatien I love that your name means "Gift." For that is what you are to me. Not given to me by that god I...
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This is sensual beauty of the highest order, my friend. You take the scene and fly with it into the heavens. Love especially how you wrote of the respect he gives his sub, not hostile or arrogant but rather a piousness. Loved that ending. You write the scene with the delicately poetic brushstrokes of a true poet priestess.
John
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Read MoreSimplicity can produce brilliance Sometimes less is more Reconnecting through resilience Sure seemed easier before Drop the beat ride the bass line Rhythm is raging hard Ladies sipping on foreign wine Melody is her calling card Guitars solo over...
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Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight ink Have a great day!!
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well said, beautifully penned.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Revealing…real…honest. Great piece LDF.
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Read MoreIt’s not a character flaw. That is what I was told by a former friend. There I stood, at the threshold of life and death, a decision was to be made. I had all my medication bottles...
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I love this story.