Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.

hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths 💕

Dark, sad, revealing. Wonderfully executed Jade.

I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.

Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.

You come up with fantastic imagery

You nailed it.

Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!

LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?

I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.

Poweful work and great rhyme. Excellent.

Thanks, girl! I like to make my own entertainment when the lights go down!

The silence is loud. I like this. The flow of it.

Enjoy the silence. Always..Make the time you have a silent one. People and technology get in the way all the time. Great piece of writing Jade. Good to see you over here on the other side.

Thank you kindly Adira, been there a few times myself and came to the conclusion that it’s best to move on..

Thank you Vision, good to see you here too.

Phenomenal write, Jade. So glad you made the journey to Stars Rite. Fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

It does, doesn’t it? That is why most people are uncomfortable with it. Thank you for reading.

Thank you Damian, I’m glad I did.