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Estranged..
You entertained chaos within my ribcage
You left fingerprints along my spine
Imprinted this everlasting melody within my soul.
Only to leave me wondering, if this storm ever meant to you, what it meant to me.
Your etherial essence portrayed as being the one true love of my life.
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Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.
hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths đź’•
Thank you kindly Brenda. Sometimes I really get into deep emotions…and I pen it out.
I FELT this, really felt it in my core.
We think we are the only person to be twisted up because of another person and then we read something like this…
Bravo, Jade. This is excellent. I hope your heart has healed.
I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.
It’s my pleasure to read you
Dark, sad, revealing. Wonderfully executed Jade.
Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.