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Thank you Damian, it really means a lot to me.
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Whoa!!!
First off, splendid writing
Very unique and intriguing topic.
Powerful stuffNaaj
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Thank you so much Naaj!
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Thank you Adira! 🙏🏻
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Great lyrics, my friend! I like your play on words. Your song is an awesome listening pleasure!
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it.
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Read MoreA Decomposing Lovehe said : stop suckin on toxic penisit's fuckin up your PH balance tired of you comin home smellin like you was at the fish market all day out there fuckin 40 year old wanna...
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I couldn’t help but giggle @ ‘living in they mommas basement’…
This is the definition of toxic.
You laid it all out there, vivid and raw.
Loved the Rod Serling tying that was very clever!
Great ink, Naj
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Ahhh. Good to see you here BV!. Thx for the support. I’ll be passing by your page soon enough.
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. This was kick ass, a raw spill my friend. Loved the “Rod Sterling” element. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you dug the vibe, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
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Great piece. Loved the last stanza in particular.
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Big thx for the support, Drieks
Much respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir this is some powerful writing…California rent is no better and sometimes we hate each other…💕great write…
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Yeahhh…I heard about California. Nasty work.
Big thx for the support, hunNaaj
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Yikes…yeah, watch the spaghetti…
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woooweee…that spaghetti. Haha. Thx luv for the support.
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Oof.. it’s one thing to have swamp puss…but eating her spaghetti too? Some people have nothing to lose…lol, I enjoyed the humor in this spill..although it’s so real and so raw. Well done Naaj! xx
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Haha…I’m glad you dug the dark humor in this vibe P.G.
much respect
Naaj
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Haha…Glad you enjoyed Dragon-Fire.
Thx for the supportNaaj
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damn. that fifth stanza hit hard. excellent write.
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thank you dearest poet most graciously it is honesty when I feel so down 💕
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Great penwork Brenda…
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thank you graciously lovely poet 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously also thank you for being here and being you 💕
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Heavy stuff. But I expect nothing less from you, Brenda
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hello dearest Naajir these admissions make me sad but it could be true thank you my friend most graciously 💕
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Razor sharp ink… Thank you for sharing.
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thank you graciously dearest Drieks 💕
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“It is with great sacrifice that I put myself away
pretending all is fine
My depression is deep
It drinks from the sunflowers
until even they fail to shine”You paint Van Gogh with the brush stroke of words 🌼
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what a beautiful comment thank you dearest Joe 💕
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You can take even melancholy and turn it into high art This has such exquisite emotional resonance for me as I read tonight. You have great talent my friend and it shines even through your dark clouds.
John
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thank you graciously dearest John that is a lovely thing to say 💕
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Read MoreI wrote recently that "Heaven can wait," however, now I am not so sure. I've been a month off my anti-psychotic medication. Lorazapagm and lithium are keeping me alive. But there's one other thing; writing. To...
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The version with Lacey Sturm is one of my favorite songs. My wife takes lithium and has done a lot for her. All I can say is don’t feel you need to end a lifetime of wonderful stories over a moment of pain. But I get it. Life is hard. Stick around, friend.
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Thank you. When the unreal fades into reality, it becomes near impossible to be happy.
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Thank you, Adira.
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Great lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian