A Decomposing Love
he said :
stop suckin on toxic penis
it’s fuckin up your PH balance
tired of you comin home
smellin like you was at the
fish market all day
out there fuckin 40 year old
wanna be rappers livin in they
mamma’s basement
she said:
stop stickin your dick in
ms.swamp-thing’s pussy
you got algae growin around
your balls and your breath
reeks of seaweed..
if ya know like i know
you betta stop eatin that
bitch’s spaghetti too
[Rod Serling Voice]
this is the tale of
two ain’t shit individuals
in the throes of residual fallout out
from a chemical romance
turned poisonous..
noxious to the core
once hot n heavy
fuckin three..four times a day
filled with passion and lust
now just two venomous pit vipers
filled with disdain and disgust
cohabiting by attrition
one needy and possessive
the other greedy and obsessive
stuck in this oppressive
fucked up situation
cuz neither one of their
broke azzes
can afford to pay this
high azz NYC rent
by their goddamn selves
stop suckin on toxic penis
it’s fuckin up your PH balance
tired of you comin home
smellin like you was at the
fish market all day
out there fuckin 40 year old
wanna be rappers livin in they
mamma’s basement
she said:
stop stickin your dick in
ms.swamp-thing’s pussy
you got algae growin around
your balls and your breath
reeks of seaweed..
if ya know like i know
you betta stop eatin that
bitch’s spaghetti too
[Rod Serling Voice]
this is the tale of
two ain’t shit individuals
in the throes of residual fallout out
from a chemical romance
turned poisonous..
noxious to the core
once hot n heavy
fuckin three..four times a day
filled with passion and lust
now just two venomous pit vipers
filled with disdain and disgust
cohabiting by attrition
one needy and possessive
the other greedy and obsessive
stuck in this oppressive
fucked up situation
cuz neither one of their
broke azzes
can afford to pay this
high azz NYC rent
by their goddamn selves
I couldn’t help but giggle @ ‘living in they mommas basement’…
This is the definition of toxic.
You laid it all out there, vivid and raw.
Loved the Rod Serling tying that was very clever!
Great ink, Naj
Looking forward to more
Ahhh. Good to see you here BV!. Thx for the support. I’ll be passing by your page soon enough.
Powerfully penned, Naaj. This was kick ass, a raw spill my friend. Loved the “Rod Sterling” element. Appreciate you.
Damian
Glad you dug the vibe, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
Great piece. Loved the last stanza in particular.
Impeccable flow.
Big thx for the support, Drieks
Much respect
Naaj
hello dearest Naajir this is some powerful writing…California rent is no better and sometimes we hate each other…💕great write…
Yeahhh…I heard about California. Nasty work.
Big thx for the support, hun
Naaj
Yikes…yeah, watch the spaghetti…