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Read MoreI will die and you will come drape me in your sleepy arms and carry me to bed my pulseless repose ...
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Thanks, Peter.
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A heart-touching write!
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I’m so glad you like it, M.E
Thank you
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OMG… you died…
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Exactly…
Now, look what you’ve done
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Powerfully penned, Meg. Pulls at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much, Damian!
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DEAD CLIMAX….
Macabre ‘n cold, necrophiliac’s art,
bizarre love-making to an unbeating heart.
Mutuality is most that it lacks …
thus, it always ends in a “dead climax.”See, Megan,
How pervertedly alluring you stimulate my warped poetic senses? Heehee-HEEE!👺😈From the span of scrumptiously lip-lickingly erotic tales to mournfully sad Free Verse poetry, your fantasy imbued ink never skips a beat.
One might be left wondering what unfathomably deep, magical well you draw your brilliantly imaginative scenarios from … yet, even if I had a deliciously palastable bucketful, I’m not sure I’d know what to do with them.Of course, your artwork choice and title are sheer perfection in leading us into the atmospheric aura that follows … imagery-gorged, offset lines create continuous interest, assuring every millisecond of attention will be held from one staccato line ’til gobsmacking finalé.
Even in death you deny him the arduous warmth he always craved
Ever, enviously yours! ⁓ Rascal🥂-
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LOL!
Make that “palatable” bucketful….-
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I have to apologize for the late response, Richard. I’m so in love with you. I just want to die in your arms every time I read a response to a poem. Your insight is so sexy and stimulating. Yeah, I have this ragdoll thing – a morbid fantasy based on an unmentionable experience. Take me to your basement.
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Thank you so much for that, SeaCat! I appreciate the read!
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I know one thing
I wouldn’t be flaccid around youUnusual vulnerability and I love that
BIG LIKE
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Read MoreThe sputtering smoke of her lamp, throwing quivering shadows on the the cold stone walls of her tomb. But she cannot escape death. And she cannot embrace the life she once possessed in daylight. So, her Gothic heart thunders on, the crimson lamplight of her soullessness, merely...
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Superb write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The atmospheric density and the haunting dark imagery catch the readers attention with the first words. Your gothic queen is a wonderfully terrifying beauty who makes me want to read more. Brilliant work, Daniel!
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Doing a complete rewrite. As I have realized the potential for this story…
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What imagery. You have the magic of the pen
Daniel. I was completely pulled in from the first line. Thanks for sharing
Jackie 👍🏻
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Sapphirewolf and
Crimsin are now friends
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Powerfully penned, SW. Sometimes less is more, outstanding write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Terrific write….short and powerful.
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Beautiful ink! Thank you for sharing.
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Read MoreThe moment the holy water sizzled on my flesh, I knewthat I was destined for flames. The priest saw it, frownedand no longer called me, "son."He walked on by, never to bless me again. The moment I died, I ascended.Below me...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daniel I fear I will be judged for my delusions I think I will go to hell this is uplifting way to look at things 💕
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I believe I’m going to hell too. We can’t decide when, but we can decide how we meet that end. Love this life the fullest and to any good God that should count for something. I’ll stay strong if you stay strong, Brenda.
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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thank you Daniel hugs 💕
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I like it….sad but honest.
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