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I will die

      and you     

will come

         drape me

in your     sleepy arms

  and carry me

                  to bed

 

my pulseless repose

            no matter

                      of concern

 

Coolest skin

           of the warmest

                memorial

 

Undressing me

       you recall

                      how   

          I’ve always

                            been flaccid

      to your infinite

                            adoration

                                   

 

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    1. DEAD CLIMAX….

      Macabre ‘n cold, necrophiliac’s art,
      bizarre love-making to an unbeating heart.
      Mutuality is most that it lacks …
      thus, it always ends in a “dead climax.”

      See, Megan,
      How pervertedly alluring you stimulate my warped poetic senses? Heehee-HEEE!👺😈

      From the span of scrumptiously lip-lickingly erotic tales to mournfully sad Free Verse poetry, your fantasy imbued ink never skips a beat.
      One might be left wondering what unfathomably deep, magical well you draw your brilliantly imaginative scenarios from … yet, even if I had a deliciously palastable bucketful, I’m not sure I’d know what to do with them.

      Of course, your artwork choice and title are sheer perfection in leading us into the atmospheric aura that follows … imagery-gorged, offset lines create continuous interest, assuring every millisecond of attention will be held from one staccato line ’til gobsmacking finalé.

      Even in death you deny him the arduous warmth he always craved
      Ever, enviously yours! ⁓ Rascal🥂

    2. The short, choppy lines, give this poem a gentle, elegiac quality which is suited to its subject. The first six lines “I will die … carry me to bed” are a serene pleasure to read.

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