I think you did well writing about the siren and showing that they are not evil. I like the flow of this piece.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words pulled on these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your words have a way of slicing below the surface, to the core. The last two lines remind me of the lyrics, “ it’s better to burn out than it is to rust”. Keep shining, my friend.

I sincerely hope to meet you on the other side!

thank you graciously dearest Gus for feeling me so deeply it’s appreciated 💕

Powerfully penned, Willow. The musical arrangement is an excellent accompaniment to your words. Excellent composition my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The music works well with your words. Most excellent, my friend 🌼

damn. excellent write

Right back at ya, girl 🧡

Thank you 😊

This is awesome, Willow.

Superb work.

This is like the soundtrack to a movie. Great storyline.

We live and learn and become stronger for it.

Great ink.